Reviews for "Keeper of Light"

Sun Mar 28, 2004 2:24 pm

Nicely done for now, try to be a little more realistic when explaining her skills and abilities. It *is* possible to have learned things in martial arts for defense sake but it's a slightly cliche. Sorry, I hope you do not get offended by this. Surprised smiley face

ops: I've read a lot of fics where the OC knows all these amazing techniques and skills *before* coming to Middle Earth. It's entirely my fault that I'm reviewing this but I see a lot of promise with this fic. One of my favourite parts in you fic is the fact that you gave her a sense of confusion and calmness throughout the fighting sequence. The whole "what the hell I'm doing here" and "I was surprisingly calm" bits were interesting...your main character seems to have a mature outlook on certain situations that you gave her. Many 24-year-old women are not like that and there are many exceptions! All I have to say is: Wave smiley face

Hurrah!

Keep up the great work.

Mon Mar 29, 2004 8:00 pm

this is off to a great start! keep it commin Very Happy smiley face

Sat Apr 17, 2004 12:38 pm

wohoo! you updated! yea! this ch. was really interesting! keep it comming! Smile smiley face

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