Reviews for "A Little Night Music"

Mon Mar 29, 2004 12:05 am

Ariel-

This was superb. You have accomplished what is really rare in erotica -- making the characters and their culture distinct. I don't think I could change the names of Rosie and Sam to, say, Faramir and Eowyn, and the story make sense. That to me is a sign of a really good piece. This was sensuous but at the same time touching.

One little nitpick. I think it is written "Middle-earth," not "Middle Earth"?

Cheers, Marta

Mon Mar 29, 2004 2:19 pm

It was very good. Sam is very in-character, and yet more mature. He seems to have continued in his growing process, and is now very atuned with the things around him- specially the things that matter most.
I loved the way you captured family life so well. This was beautiful.

Wed Mar 31, 2004 9:20 pm

I was idly browsing the stories today and happened across this. What a pleasant surprise, and tsk on you for not telling me it was done. Smile smiley face

I enjoyed it very much. I especially liked how you found just the right images for Rosie's sexual bliss ... intense without being inappropriately high-flown. I also really liked the electricity of the atmosphere, how they both just knew it was going to be a perfect night. Great stuff!

--Rose

Thu Apr 01, 2004 9:35 am

That was truly lovely, so intimate and comfortable and exciting all at once! This married woman thanks you Very Happy smiley face

Mon Apr 19, 2004 7:39 am

I love to read sensual stories about married couples. Too many writers must think that you cannot be married and feel like this. I do not think I could feel anywhere near this close with anyone other than my husband.

Mon Apr 19, 2004 11:41 am

What a lovely piece. Well written, very well thought out. I very much imagine Sam being like this with his Rosie. Not many delve into the family life after marriage. But this is truly beautiful.

Mon May 17, 2004 2:11 pm

Oh... this is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read! So sensual, so sexy... and at the same time so hobbit-ish! I'm loving it! Very Happy smiley face

I can definitely imagine Sam and Rosie like this. I especially liked the idea that because hobbits are so close to nature, perhaps they can somehow sense when their mate is fertile? Who knows... Wink smiley face

Fri Jun 11, 2004 9:18 am

Simply lovely.

Sat Jul 31, 2004 9:08 pm

What else can I possibly add? That was absolutely lovely - and I agree - there is something highly sensual about making love with someone to whom you are bonded that does not exist in any other type of relationship. I love how well Sam and Rosie know each other, know each other's responses and quirks...reminds me of my own marriage. I agree with Rous - it is SO nice to see great MARRIED sex! I, for one, can attest to the fact that it DOES exist!

VERY sweet!

Sat Jun 25, 2005 9:42 pm

How lovely! You made Sam's and Rosie's relationship comfortable and habitual, but still vital and passionate. I agree with the others, hot, believeable married sex is my favorite and so difficult to find in fic.

Great Job!

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