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gariotin
Joined: 07 Jun 2003 Reviews: 27
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Mon Mar 29, 2004 8:08 pm
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Great job! A very moving and interesting story - really addresses motivation and back-story for Boromir. Very much explains his conflicts when he meets Aragorn at the beginning of the Fellowship. And, of course, touches on the unending sorrow that destroys his father when he
learns of Boromir's death. A very creative rite-of-passage story and expression of this proud
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
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Fri Apr 02, 2004 3:24 pm
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Very well written, very enjoyable read! I don't think there was a single word or concept that didn't make sense and fall into the cannon, while still being an original little peek into characters before the story we all know so well.
Lovely! |
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Hathor

Joined: 10 Jun 2003 Reviews: 52
Location: Lancashire, England
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Mon Apr 05, 2004 7:40 am
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| Absolutely stunning imagery, and also fitted very nicely to answer a few questions about the Swetwards, Denethor and Boromir. I really enjoyed this - thanks for sharing. |
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ladyrheena
Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 44
Location: Humming in the corner.
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Mon Apr 05, 2004 9:47 am
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| Ooooh, very very very good. Excellent backstory fillage. Me like muchly! |
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Wed Apr 07, 2004 2:04 am
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An outstanding depiction of the world of Denethor.
I wonder--does he mean it when he says 10,000 years will not suffice? IIs it meant sincerely? Or is it the bitter cry of an angry man?
It's not often that a fic gets me thinking--but this one did. |
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ringfreak
Joined: 04 Mar 2004 Reviews: 10
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Thu Apr 08, 2004 1:24 pm
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Great story! Such a great depiction of Denethor and his son. So often they are both brushed aside as idiots. You've given their actions a real background. I like these two characters and it was good to see a story where they were treated sympathetically.
Wonderful writing! It felt like reading a chapter out of the book itself.  |
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004 Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Thu Apr 08, 2004 5:19 pm
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| Marta, this is a wonderful, insightful work. I'm glad to see its deserved recognition in the Spotlight. |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Wed Apr 14, 2004 10:47 am
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| I enjoyed this. I do not usually read stories concerning Gondor, but was moved to try it. It is well-written. Thank you for opening eyes. |
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Ninde
Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 25
Location: Headed for Middle Earth
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Sat Apr 24, 2004 6:49 pm
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| Mata, you're not only a great beta, but a great storyteller. Very interesting and insightful |
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SingerAngel
Joined: 14 Oct 2003 Reviews: 11
Location: Oz
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Thu May 06, 2004 5:53 am
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| This story was well written, and well researched. The characters' emotions are conveyed really well. Keep writing, you're a great writer |
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