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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Sat Jun 19, 2004 7:42 am
Interesting. But should the second and forth lines in the first stanza not rhyme? Just curious. I pesonally like off-kilter poems. It breaks the molds (I really do not care for poetry much at all. Go fig with mine). Anyway, I do like it. Lurk smiley face Drunk smiley face
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Sat Jun 19, 2004 8:01 am
I like it. Good images, well contrastedSmile smiley face
 
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GypsieRose

Joined: 09 Jul 2003
Reviews: 45
Location: Illinois, USA
Sat Jun 19, 2004 6:46 pm
What a great idea! Perfect choice of poem as model for this subject, and well-carried out.

--Rose
 
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Julie
Joined: 02 Feb 2004
Reviews: 23
Location: Texas
Sat Jun 19, 2004 6:59 pm
Marta, this was wonderful! Such powerful imagery so well expressed. Wow. Great job!
--Julie
 
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