Reviews for "Pen-Nîn Tithen"

Sun Jun 15, 2003 8:23 am

Lovely story. Poignant and meaningful. You write Arwen as a wonderfully rounded character. Please write more.

Mon Jun 16, 2003 4:59 am

Beautiful, lyric and wonderful!

Thu Jun 26, 2003 3:11 pm

Loved it. It's so lyric, and so real. I could SEE Arwen in her chamber rocking her child, and Aragorn riding off back to gondor because his baby was sick. And Arwen's thoughts on human sickness... great! Aragorn is a healer and she's all alone with something she does not know, even with all her millennia of wisdom.
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Amazing.

Thu Jun 26, 2003 5:10 pm

Beautifully written.

I am very fond of this doubting and desperating Arwen, while she still holds on to her choice.

Thank you!

Sat Nov 29, 2003 10:08 pm

This was a wonderful story! You wrote Arwen, Aragorn, and Eldarion just perfectly. I loved it! I just imagine that this would really happen to these characters because you stayed true to who they are and how Tolkein wrote them. Please, write more!

Wed Mar 16, 2005 2:20 am

This is so very lovely...Arwen is such a good mother...and Aragorn has the right of it...his son should come first. Thank you for sharing.

Wed Mar 16, 2005 4:36 am

Arwen is beautifully rendered; her worries are quite real and heartfelt. At times the lyricism of the story reaches poetic heights.

Most Royal families do (or did) permit their children some familiarity with the servants', both to allow the children some extra playmates and to permit them some freedom from the stiff etiquette required in court. Allowing eldarion to do so would be in keeping with most Royal behavior.

Wed Mar 16, 2005 5:52 am

Wow...i don't think there are any other words that i can utter that will completely cover everything.

Great story...wonderfully written Aragorn, lovely Arwen...and i just wanted to scoop up little Eldarion and give him a hug! Very Happy smiley face

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