Reviews for "Okay, NOW Panic!"

Tue Nov 08, 2005 10:41 pm

Eeeeee! This was a great chapter, but it only made me scream at the end. Surely you must know how highly anticipated the next chapter is to your faithful readers. I'm dying for it, man. This is still the best story ever. Just so you know.

Sun Nov 13, 2005 11:46 am

It's good she got the confession over with for the sake of her friendship with Lindir and the others. This is such a great story and it always makes me happy to see there is a new chapter in my e-mail.

Sun Nov 13, 2005 2:01 pm

I was kind of hoping that she would tell Lindir in private, but oh well. You know best, I am certain. I'm glad that he took it well. Better than I had been expecting.

This is one of those stories where I can't figure out how it will end. Will Pen-ii stay in Middle Earth? Or will she be transported back to good ol' modern days? I'm curious, but not enough to tell you to hurry up and write the ending. I'm enjoying this story too much.

I'm greatly anticipating her eventual meeting with Halbarad's sons (she *is* going to meet them, isn't she?).

Sun Nov 13, 2005 6:42 pm

"She felt lost in those eyes, drawn into them, and it was as if she could hear a far away ocean's roar or the whisper of the wind in long-forgotten forests ringing inside her head."

Gave my goosebumps, goosebumps.

I was afraid that I had been so excited about The Meeting that I would be dissapointed. I wasn't.

What really amazes me about these stories is the fact that never once has anything been literary cliche. Realism to the Nth degree.

Thank you for writing this.

Sun Nov 13, 2005 9:20 pm

WOOHOO!!!

So glad you are continuing with the story. I love how you put Penny in realistic situations. We can't all be cheerful 24 hours a day. I keep hoping that she will meet Haldir and his brothers, and maybe in the near future a romance, but however you write it I know will be great. I have never read a more enjoyable fan fiction story. You seriously need to get paid for this.

Keep up the excellent work and update soon (hint,hint)!!!

Cecilia

Thu Nov 17, 2005 1:37 pm

Well, it's all out in the open now. I'm glad that Lindir reacted well to the news - I had wondered how he would react to finding out Penny's secret.

I can imagine how Penny must have felt in the company of Galadriel. How intimidating would THAT be? Geez! Poor girl. Luckily, they all tried their best to make her feel comfortable. I don't know how successful they were, but at least they tried. Very Happy smiley face

Great chapter!

Michelle...

Sat Nov 19, 2005 11:55 am

That was a wonderful day with the laundry, the bathing and the tour with Rimlath and Lindir. I thought the description of the vertigo was superb. I do suffer from vertigo and while I was reading that part my heart rate went up and my breathing changed and I felt like I was there (perish the thought). As much as I would love to see Lothlorien, I have no idea how I would get up into the talans.

Sat Nov 19, 2005 11:55 am

That was a wonderful day with the laundry, the bathing and the tour with Rimlath and Lindir. I thought the description of the vertigo was superb. I do suffer from vertigo and while I was reading that part my heart rate went up and my breathing changed and I felt like I was there (perish the thought). As much as I would love to see Lothlorien, I have no idea how I would get up into the talans.

Sat Nov 19, 2005 10:24 pm

I'm scared stiff of vertigo, and you had just provided the most believable and accurate description of how would anyone paranoid of heigt would do exactly that. Lolz.

Haldir!!!! Ahh... Mary-Sues would indeed be jealous of her Wink smiley face

And I agree with red. Please, o, please, o, please have Penny fall over an elf, preferably a canon one *wink* *wink* lolz....

Sun Nov 20, 2005 1:38 am

Its always a good thing when I see that email notice that you have added another chapter.
Enjoying the pace you are setting and the relationships that Penny is building. While I would love to see some romance, I'm in no hurry as the story is just so bloody entertaining as is. Looking forward to reading about the next party/possible meeting with Haldir and his brothers(talk about your 'thud' moment!)
Cheers

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