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MikaBird
Joined: 15 Dec 2005 Reviews: 1
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Mon Jan 16, 2006 3:49 am
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Oh what a great chapter. Again. I'm so curious about what's wrong with Penny, though. Please, please update soon! And: Oh my God, do I ever love Rimlath! *huggles*  |
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005 Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
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Mon Jan 16, 2006 5:19 pm
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| Eeeek! Evil cliffie writer! What is happening to Penny? She can't be pregnant can she? Fun updates with the drinking and dancing. |
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Grianna
Joined: 03 Jul 2004 Reviews: 9
Location: PA
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Thu Jan 19, 2006 12:07 pm
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I you!!!! Okay, not really but I have only just rediscovered this Story. I am so glad that you are updating it again.  |
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005 Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
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Fri Jan 20, 2006 1:28 pm
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| Oh dear. A decidedly worrying chapter. This will be a really tough trip for Penny and the Elves that are taking care of her. I am glad that they did not leave her in Rohan. |
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Daeuial

Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 44
Location: NYC
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Fri Jan 20, 2006 5:23 pm
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I didn't think she was pregnant! Okay, it's the first thing that comes to mind when a female character is mysteriously ill, but come on! When? With whom? *shakes head*
Oooh, I felt so sorry for her. Worst, most embarrassing thing ever. And then lying there and thinking about all the many, many unclean things that could have caused it, wondering what evil micro-organisms were swimming around in her blood and wreaking havoc on her digestive system. *shudders*
But once again with the realism. Can't argue with it. God I love this story. *hugs laptop* |
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RoxieRxChicago

Joined: 15 May 2005 Reviews: 108
Location: Kentucky
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Fri Jan 20, 2006 5:43 pm
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Oh God, poor Penny. First sexual assault, then a hideous hang over, and now food poisoning. Wow, Rohan really sucks Can't wait to read the next chapter!! |
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sakai213
Joined: 03 Feb 2004 Reviews: 21
Location: Eatontown,NJ
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Fri Jan 20, 2006 10:19 pm
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So sorry that I've been remiss in reading and not reviewing...such a great tale that you weave for us boz...Kudos and keep up the good work!
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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Sat Jan 21, 2006 5:20 am
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I was wondering when this would happen. Really.
And the scary thing is, what she most likely has is E. coli, given all the horse manure. God only knows how much ends up in the food, and the food isn't necessarily well-cooked.
Second most likely scenario: she has Typhoid or Typhus. Given the unsanitary conditions...do you realize how much poo may be on people's hands? In the book Christy there is an outbreak of Typhoid in the mountain community where Christy lives. The symptoms seem similar, except that she doesn't have the congestion in her lungs.
Listen to me, analyzing all this. It's all that archaeology I took in college - just got my degree in Anthropology! Anyways, great chapter! I look forward to hearing more. |
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Jael

Joined: 18 May 2005 Reviews: 13
Location: USA, Wisconsin
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Thu Jan 26, 2006 1:54 pm
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Excellent new chapter! I truly hope it's some form of food poisoning rather than cholera or typhus. How dreadful for poor Penny to be so deathly and humiliatingly ill in front of the elves. You do like to put her through sheer hell, don't you?
Also, congratulations -- I think this is the first time a fanfic has ever addressed the subject of the inevitable 'Middle-earth revenge.' As anyone who has ever been to Europe or Mexico can tell you -- it's gonna happen to anyone who falls into Tolkien's world from outside. |
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Sun Jan 29, 2006 3:22 pm
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| Absolutly wonderful... yet again. Can't wait to find out how Penny deals with being sick on the road. |
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