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inglor

Joined: 26 Apr 2004 Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Thu Feb 16, 2006 11:55 am
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Evil Woman. absolutely Evil.
Thanks for taking us on that ride. Again, the details were wonderful, felt like I was there. |
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Grianna
Joined: 03 Jul 2004 Reviews: 9
Location: PA
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Thu Feb 16, 2006 1:48 pm
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| When I ever i see an update I get really excited, and then I get really sad. I get sad because I will finish with the chapter and will have to wait all over again. |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Sun Feb 19, 2006 9:44 am
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I think Penny's emotional rollercoaster came through very clearly in this chapter. She seems to have adjusted very well to her new life, but in the back of her mind is always the past. Wonderfully done! I'll be anxiously awaiting your next update.
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mistressofbucklebury
Joined: 26 Sep 2004 Reviews: 121
Location: England
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Sun Feb 19, 2006 12:48 pm
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| Once again you leave us wanting more. I can't wait for the next update. |
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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Mon Feb 20, 2006 8:18 am
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What do you mean, "long" chapter? Woman, the chapters are never long ENOUGH! *shakes fist*
*giggles* You were rather kind to Penny this time. I loved the description of the latrines. Now I just want to see what happens at the wedding... |
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theladyscribe
Joined: 26 Sep 2005 Reviews: 36
Location: cowtown, tn
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Mon Feb 20, 2006 8:31 am
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Oh no, I love the long chapters. There are few things better in the mornings than finding a new chapter to read.
This one had all the right amounts of drama and comedy, as usual. I'm intrigued by Halladan; I hope Penny gets to spend more time around him (I'm sure that she will). I love that you remembered to make Sam/Ban still incredibly shy even after all the Hobbits have been through. I do wonder if Penny will be telling anyone about the goings-on in the Shire, though.
Keep up the good work! I love this story. |
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005 Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
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Mon Feb 20, 2006 3:10 pm
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| I'm glad to see the festivities beginning in Minas Tirith. Good descripton of the loo BTW. She must be so worried about her place in all of this and what might happen that she is unprepared for. More story please. |
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Leilana
Joined: 19 Jan 2004 Reviews: 56
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Mon Feb 20, 2006 10:12 pm
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I'm so glad you're back! I'm glad you've decided to continue Penny's story and that things seem to be getting better for her. Your writing is wonderful and I always look forward to new chapters, no matter what you put that poor girl through.  |
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redlexus01
Joined: 05 Apr 2004 Reviews: 22
Location: Alabama
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Mon Feb 20, 2006 11:45 pm
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More LONG chapters....makes a bad work day better when I read one of your updates. Please keep up the execellent work!!!!
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Thu Feb 23, 2006 9:18 pm
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| Long chapter... heh. They're never long enough. Lovely, lovely, lovely. As always. |
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