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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Mon May 08, 2006 4:59 am
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Finally another update!
So sad, though. I like the background you've provided for Lindir and Eleniel. And I look forward to seeing what will happen to that bitchy woman (Sidwhatever her name is).
It should be interesting.  |
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redlexus01
Joined: 05 Apr 2004 Reviews: 22
Location: Alabama
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Mon May 08, 2006 9:47 am
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Woohoo!!!!! Another update!!! Now my day is complete. Hmmm...a possible plot line with Halladan. I like the way you think. And poor Lindir gets put on the back burner in so many stories or not even mentioned at all so, thank you for giving him a voice in yours. The way Gandalf looked at her, well I want to see where that leads as well.
Anyway, great chapter and update soon please.!!!!!
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005 Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
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Tue May 16, 2006 12:24 am
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Poor Rhimlath (sp?) I'm glad Penny has a choice in where to stay after the trip to Gondor. I'm looking forward to her interaction with the librarian. I'm also disappointed that the elves are not helping out bare chested (at least).  |
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boz4PM
Joined: 01 Dec 2003 Reviews: 38
Location: London, UK
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Thu May 18, 2006 4:51 am
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Just wanted to say a quick 'thank you' to everyone who takes time out to read this thing, let alone comment. It's great hearing your views and responses to it all. I'm so glad this story is still captivating people - that there are still people willing to read it and enjoying it, and heck it was OSA that started it all off, after all!
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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Tue May 30, 2006 5:20 am
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Oh, that was just *beautiful*. Lindir thought she'd forgotten that, eh? Heh heh heh...
I was grinning like a loon about halfway through. BEAUTIFUL! Hee hee hee!
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theladyscribe
Joined: 26 Sep 2005 Reviews: 36
Location: cowtown, tn
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Tue May 30, 2006 11:54 am
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| Poor Lindir. I do believe he deserved it, though. And the images of the Elves in 50s-style boxing outfits was quite hi-larious. Lovely work, as usual. |
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006 Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Tue May 30, 2006 1:33 pm
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HA! Lindir finally got bested. I really love this story. I can't wait to find out if anything happens w/ her and Halladan. I just love the way you personalize the elves. They are just as I imagined them. Keep up the excellent work.  |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Tue Jun 06, 2006 3:07 pm
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I adore this story. I love the way you've written Penny and the way that she is discovering Middle Earth. Penny's interactions with new characters are always a pleasure to read about. In this chapter, I loved the librarian that she met. I felt kind of sorry for him before I realized he was the human version of Rhimlath! Talk about a match made in heaven!
Now, what's this about wrestling outfits? Ha ha...I can't wait to read about this!
Great job, Boz! I'll have to go and check out your forum over at ff.net...any inside info on this story is definitely a good thing.
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Sorcia

Joined: 16 Jan 2004 Reviews: 80
Location: Gods, Sean in glasses, how dishy
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Sun Jun 11, 2006 1:39 pm
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Great chapter! HUGE! was a terrific read. Really enjoyed your description of the marketplace and Penny's walkabout in it.
Getting notices about an update on another chapter is always a big smile for me!
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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Sun Jun 11, 2006 2:17 pm
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Oh, I loved this!
Now I want to go to faire in garb! But I need money to do that...lol
This was great ! I really enjoyed the description of the marketplace. It was awsome!  |
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