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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Fri Jul 21, 2006 11:17 am
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Wow you are an amazing writer! You bring the words to life I feel as though I'm there in the hallway watching all this happen. I can't wait for the next chapter!! So update soon!!  |
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HeatherRae
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Fri Jul 21, 2006 11:47 pm
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Oh for the love of god! I think you really enjoy torturing Penny! Really!
Oi. Oi! OI!
I cringed too many times during this chapter. I'm going to go sit in the corner now and whimper.
(Chapter was great. Just painful! lol) |
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redlexus01
Joined: 05 Apr 2004
Reviews: 22
Location: Alabama
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Fri Jul 21, 2006 11:55 pm
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Whoa!! Talk about tearing someone a new asshole....sheesh!! I love it!!! Lord Elrond should be treated with respect, but in all fairness he should give the same respect in turn. True, he did provide Penny with a home and took care of her while she was sick, but he has put her on the spot many times.
Another wonderful and great chapter. Love it!! Love it!!! 
Cecilia  |
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eiranae
Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Sat Jul 22, 2006 12:06 am
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Ouch, ouch, OUCH!!! This chapter had me bawling. I felt so sorry for Penny. She keeps trying so hard to do what's right and stand up for those she loves, and she just keeps messing it up. 
It's got to be so frustrating being surrounded by a bunch of "all knowing" people. It really tore me up to see her humiliated again.
Great chapter. Great emotion. Can't wait for the next installment. |
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
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Sat Jul 22, 2006 2:29 am
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| OMG! Penny had it dumped on her big time and then she went and stepped in it with both feet. She's in such a difficult position and she can never know if she is doing the right thing. This was so well written I had to remember to breathe. Thank you for sharing. |
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Rapunzel
Joined: 29 Jan 2004
Reviews: 21
Location: Boston, MA
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Sat Jul 22, 2006 8:08 am
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Woaahhh....Penny needs to learn to control her temper! Take a breath and think a bit before rushing off and running off at the mouth!
Any romance in store for our Penny? Every time I think I see something happening, nothing happens! |
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itouchmyelf
Joined: 23 Jul 2006
Reviews: 8
Location: virginia usa
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Sat Jul 22, 2006 11:30 pm
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 omg!! this is awsome. i read the first one and had to read this one also seeing as how i loved don't panic.
and let me just say that this is a beautifully written story and i am so taken with the emotions of the charachters involved. i also want to applaud you on the realism ( did i spell that right? ) in which your write this story i find myself often going omg..how the hell would i handle that??? ( ie. monthly visitor and bathroom issues that occured in the first story) so...bravo! keep it coming!! i go back and read it all over again while waiting for you to update |
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gail
Joined: 20 Feb 2005
Reviews: 5
Location: Here and Now
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Tue Jul 25, 2006 6:48 am
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| You're tying me up to an emotional roller-coaster; I love that you're conveying those emotions with simple glances and single thoughts -- I must tell you, well done! |
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
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Tue Jul 25, 2006 9:40 am
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| Now that Penny has groveled before Elrond, what will she do next? Could she continue north with the Dunedain after they pass through Imladris? (Is that even the way the trip goes?) More story please. |
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itouchmyelf
Joined: 23 Jul 2006
Reviews: 8
Location: virginia usa
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Tue Jul 25, 2006 8:42 pm
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love the emotions in this chapter! and like also you have made me cry  it never fails lol and i must thank you for getting back to me on my questions. please update soon |
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