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sofia

Joined: 28 Mar 2004 Reviews: 78
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Sun Aug 27, 2006 9:32 am
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Finally finished catching up! Great story. I must say I do love all the titles you've come up with. Both from the orginal and the sequel. They are so unique and individual and I love them!
Anyway... I have to say, I'm rooting for a bit or romance with Penny and Halladan... or at least a very very very good friendship, which I think you are establishing already. |
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itouchmyelf
Joined: 23 Jul 2006 Reviews: 8
Location: virginia usa
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Sun Aug 27, 2006 10:26 pm
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i just reread the last chappie because i had my son in my lap the first time i read it so i couldnt concentrate like i wanted to
first let me say once again ..bravo! excellent chapter as always!
and now i will have to say that i agree with sofia about rooting for a romance with penny and halladan. i loved halbarad in the first story and how close he and penny became and now how penny and halladan are some wat developing that same relationship |
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005 Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
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Wed Aug 30, 2006 12:31 am
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I try hard to stay out of the way in the romantic aspects of other people's stories, but I feel I am forced to vote for a little romance between Halladan and Penny. It seems it might ease her way in middle earth to feel a such an attachment and a reason to stay other than whatever the PTB had in mind when she was sent.
Thanks for the update. I do enjoy this story and your characters. |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Fri Sep 01, 2006 7:30 am
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| Ok...WOW! That's all I can say! I'm absolutely over the moon that I was finally able to catch up on this story. You're doing such a great job with this, and I can't wait untill Penny talks with Elrond again. I can definitely see that that was a lesson she won't be forgetting. |
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sofia

Joined: 28 Mar 2004 Reviews: 78
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Sun Sep 03, 2006 5:22 pm
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| wonderful chapter. I was excited to see that you had Halladan on the road to recovery, or at least thats what it seemed like to me. And the bit at the end, the hand holding and such: so touching! Still rooting for that romance between him and Penny, and I see others agree with me (Or I agree with others). Keep up the great work! |
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itouchmyelf
Joined: 23 Jul 2006 Reviews: 8
Location: virginia usa
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Sun Sep 03, 2006 10:45 pm
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| as always a wonderful chappie and after not having electricity for 3 days seeing a new chapter made my day. i really liked the little moments between penny and halladan esp where he touched her face and when she wanted to hug him after he talked to his brother. i know i have said it before but this is really a beautiful and moving story and i look forward to reading future chapters. |
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Sorcia

Joined: 16 Jan 2004 Reviews: 80
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Mon Sep 04, 2006 12:11 am
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What a great chapter, #38. Glad you took some time to deal with the issue 'battle illness' and lets hope everyone can now move forward with firmer footing.
Cheers |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Tue Sep 05, 2006 9:07 am
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| I was so happy to discover that you'd already updated this again! And it's another incredible chapter that captivated me. I was so happy to find that Haklladan took a step towards healing by talking to Arvain (I apologise for any misspellings, knowing me they're probably horrendous). And the interaction between him and Penny was very heartwarming. I'm still looking forward to her next chat with Elrond, though, so may your muses and spare time be generous and plentiful! |
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melz
Joined: 06 Sep 2005 Reviews: 8
Location: London
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Fri Oct 06, 2006 6:30 am
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| I have only recently discovered your stories - which I have greatly enjoyed. You have a wonderful writing style and the structure of your stories are rich and detailed. You are able to write about angst, anger, saddness, and fun with equal passion and elaquance - which not all writers are able to do successful. I love how you have developed your characters, so you are able to see their strengths and flaws, e.g. the elves, who would elicit great love butwould also drive me mad at times (a bit like family, who you love but could cheerfully murder at times). I look forward to your future chapters whenever you able to publish them, I am amazed that you can produce so much so quickly. It is obvious that you take great care and give great thought to what you write ... but it will never be quick enough for your hungry public. Please keep enjoying the writing and don't feel pressured in producing work just to keep people happy - then there is a danger that it becomes a chore not a pleasure. Thank you for the enjoyment you have given me. |
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Vanyariel
Joined: 07 Oct 2005 Reviews: 13
Location: Atlanta, GA
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Sun Oct 08, 2006 4:41 pm
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Another fantastic chapter! Thanks so much for the update!  |
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