Reviews for "Okay, NOW Panic!"

Mon Apr 26, 2004 10:44 am

I know, we all cry for more, like the spoiled little brats we are. But it´s your own fault, spoiling us like that! Sooo, gimme, gimme, gimme!! Laughing smiley face

This is soo good! Loved the whole wedding-gift-angst. I´ve been to enough weddings to understand her worries. Thank god I´ve never attended a royal one! Shocked smiley face

Will there be any lovey-dovey for Penny? Please!! Can´t you make an elf kiss her? I really want to read about her reaction to that! Very Happy smiley face

Thu Apr 29, 2004 3:42 pm

*just having read Anna's feedback* I can imagine Lindir kissing Penny, the rogue, but not any other Elf I think. LOL

GREAT sequel you've got going here! I'm misbehaving and using both hands to type, even though the doctor says that's a no no (pulled a tendon in my right hand) because I HAVE to tell you just what I loved about this story so far. *g*

You made me cry my eyes out over Halbarad's death and I just thought that the way you did it, having him concerned for Penny AND the mention of his late wife were soooo touching. It was the comment about his sons' mother that really set off the waterworks. I'd managed to contain them until that point,but that tipped the scales in favor of tears. *sniffling again at the thought of it*
The fact Halbarad made his son promise to look after Penny like that is entirely fitting with that character and I'm soooo glad you put that in there. I really look forward to their meeting and Penny's reaction to it. I hope for the son's sake that he knows how to be diplomatic in how he words things and doesn't make Penny mad. She'd snap his his off before he knew what hit him. lol

The idea to decorate a vase for Arwen as her wedding gift was sweet and I adore the fact there's a line of poetry on it too. Lovely!

Glad you took someone else's suggestion and gave the woman a better dress for the wedding. *vbg* I'm soooo glad we're going to see her travel and meet many more well known figures in Middle Earth! Please do write more soon? I love this! *happy sigh*

Sat May 01, 2004 11:58 pm

As I expected! Excellent!! I felt as I was there all over again. First with the movie, then the book, and now your sequel!! How very detailed and so well-written!

I didn't think I could handle reading about Halabard's death after getting to know him so well in your first story...but you eased the at the end there by having him tell his sons that he would finally be able to meet up with his wife. It makes it easier somewhat, though I will miss him.

I have only read the first chapter so far, nd because its getting so late now, it will have to be enough until tomorrow..."sigh"...but I am so very excited about what you have awaiting us readers in the next chapters! I see there is now a tie between Halbarad's son and Pen-ii!! What an interesting twist...I love it!! I am also happy that she will not be left forever wondering about Halbarad. She may just yet have some closure.

Your devoted fan: Melissa Very Happy smiley face

Mon May 03, 2004 5:16 pm

If I could give gold stars for good writing, my screen would be covered in em.

IloveitIloveitIloveit....... and now I want more!

Mon May 03, 2004 5:52 pm

I love how you have still kept up with all the little details that many writers do not address in their writing. I have often wondered how elves, men, etc. have dealt with cleanliness and such while traveling (and just in general). I loved 'Don't Panic!' and I am sure that this story will be just as good, if not better.

Mon May 03, 2004 10:55 pm

Oh how interesting!! Communal bathing with the elves! LOL!! That should be an interesting chapter!

As always, an excellent chapter to an even more excellent story!! I am thoroughly enjoying this new sequel!! Keep writing!!!!! I want more!!!

Melissa Very Happy smiley face

Tue May 04, 2004 8:09 pm

O WOW! This is gettin REALLY interesting! Everyone bathing together! hahaha this is getting better by the chapter! Keep up the Great work and update soon! Very Happy smiley face

Wed May 05, 2004 3:35 pm

Bathing with the elves?! Getting naked in the midst of bloody perfect elves?! Shocked smiley face

I would´ve been utterly mortified! Thankfully (for Pennys part, anyway...) she will bathe with ellith only. Will she spy on the ellyn when they are naked and gorgeous? I know, I have a one-track-mind. Very Happy smiley face

BTW, where are all the elflings?

Oh, wonderful, lovely, addictive! You write so well, boz. The language flows nicely, the plot is thrilling and captivating, the characterization is believable... I could go on and on, but I won´t! Laughing smiley face

I have to go to bed now. Soo tired... Good night, sleep tight. Do let the elves bite! Twisted Evil smiley face

Fri May 07, 2004 12:12 am

Updates???? Please!!!??? I am so patiently (actually rather impatiently) awaiting a new chapter!!!

Please update soon?

Melissa Confused smiley face

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Sat May 08, 2004 8:54 am

Apologies for the slower rate of posting so far with the sequel. I have coursework and stuff at the moment, and these past few chapters have been tricky to write as well. Have no fear: chapter 5 is with my betas even as I type. I am hoping the pace will pick up a bit once they hit Lothlorien, but if things are a bit slow, then my apologies, but such is the way of things at times... Confused smiley face

My sincere thanks for all the reviews and support for the sequel so far. Very Happy smiley face

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