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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005 Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Sun Sep 07, 2008 2:53 pm
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| A very spectacular chapter! I loved it! You left a little teaser at the end. Now I can't wait for the next update. But of course I will wait patiently. I look forward to the next one. |
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inglor

Joined: 26 Apr 2004 Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Mon Sep 08, 2008 12:11 am
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I had a grin on my face all the way until the last sentence when I knew you were going to cliff hang it.
You are evil, tricksy and must be destroyed. |
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Sorcia

Joined: 16 Jan 2004 Reviews: 80
Location: Gods, Sean in glasses, how dishy
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Mon Sep 08, 2008 9:41 am
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thinking Halladan's question will not exactly be the sort of question Penny 'thinks' it might be.
Great chapter! |
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006 Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:10 pm
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Oh! You're killing me! Wonderful, terrible suspense.
Another wonderful chapter. I love the way you weave the tiny details throughout. The slightest hints that send chills up Penny's spine (and mine as well!) I'll be waiting impatiently for the next. |
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006 Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Wed Sep 10, 2008 4:36 pm
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YES! YES! YES!
*gives you Arvain sized hugs.*
That was brilliant, wonderful, exceptional.
*fans self*
And I'm glad to know the party doesn't end here. I love it. Thanks for this. |
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Wed Sep 10, 2008 6:32 pm
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| Squee!!! I've been waiting for this since Penny was in Minas Tirith! *dances for joy* |
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005 Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Wed Sep 10, 2008 6:45 pm
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| Now this was a truly great chapter. I agree you have become a good writer and I will truly be looking for more stories from you in the future. that after I am done with this one and this one is obviously not done yet. Bring on the next chapter! I hope you don't mind but I would like to make a hard copy (paper) to take with me on long driving trips with my husband(I do not drive....yet) |
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littlecorinthian
Joined: 06 Feb 2005 Reviews: 36
Location: Seattle, WA
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Wed Sep 10, 2008 9:32 pm
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Yaaaaay!!!! :0) Oh, I was hoping that was what you were leading up to and I'm so excited! Happy dance for both Penny and Halladan! :0P
Wonderful chapter, I can't wait (even more than usual) to read more!! |
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Dulcinea

Joined: 25 Nov 2006 Reviews: 64
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Wed Sep 10, 2008 10:35 pm
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| Finally! I was prepared to be pissed until Halladan turned back and grabbed Penii. I am also very pleased that this is not the end, because I want to read about the Halladan-Penii wedding and maybe perhaps possibly the wedding night? I also put in a request for at least an epilogue detailing babies and a happily wedded Arvain. |
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lishwitch9
Joined: 09 Feb 2004 Reviews: 2
Location: Washington
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Wed Sep 10, 2008 11:20 pm
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| Squee! This chapter was so welcome and well done. The first half of the story made my heart hurt for them and had me a bit teary eyed while the last half of the story had me grinning like a loon at their happiness. Yay! Yay yay yay yay yay! |
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