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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004 Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Sat May 08, 2004 12:45 pm
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Delightful! I was surprised no one came to check on me when I read the 'Dorwinion Barrell’ part, I was laughing too hard to read at one point. The characters are wonderfully believable, the plot progresses nicely...... very high on my list of best stories ever. Now then, please excuse me while I toddle off to pray HARD for a quick update  |
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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004 Reviews: 67
Location: Brazil
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Sat May 08, 2004 9:57 pm
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I don't know about you, but I'm getting fonder and fonder of Lindir at each chapter. He is so charming, funny and concerned about Penny... As things are going, I'll end up falling in love with the naughty Elf 
You are so smart in the construction of your characters. They have depth and emotions that make them seem to be alive. I love the way you describe the landscapes and utensils.
Anyway, everything is wonderful! Keep up the wonderful work! 
And I'm already dying for another update  |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Sun May 09, 2004 12:49 am
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Oh, god. Erestor in a barrel...
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esmeralda

Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Reviews: 11
Location: France
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Sun May 09, 2004 4:30 am
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As good as I expected it to be... Every time I see that This story has been updated , I just feel like doing the happy dance! And I agree with kvannom, Lindir turns out to be quite the charmer. A huge "thanks" to all those involved in the writing of this story
I can't wait for another update! |
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Anna

Joined: 29 Jan 2004 Reviews: 108
Location: Sweden
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Sun May 09, 2004 4:39 pm
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I never really cared for Lindir, but now....well, let´s just say he´s attracted my attention...
I agree with esmeralda about doing the happy dance! Actually, I don´t dance, but I do cheer loudly and wave my arms around like I´ve lost it! My hubby thinks I´m as mad as a hatter.
Thank you, btw, for explaining about the elflings.
Poor Erestor... Although, I wouldn´t have minded seeing him wearing nothing but a barrel!  |
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
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Sun May 09, 2004 6:24 pm
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Oh you weren't kidding about being mean to Penny, were you? *snicker* First the not really awake and having to face etherearal beauty of Elves first thing in the morning and the bad hair and then the bathing in an ice cold river scream that led to serious embarrassment. Oh my! *trying not to laugh and failing*
I LOVE Lindir, he's such a rascal. *vbg* I'm really VERY glad Penny gets along with him so well. 
LOLOLOLOLOLOL Poor Erestor! That must have been sooo embarrassing for him, mortifying even, poor guy. *still giggling like mad* |
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WhyteIvy
Joined: 04 May 2004 Reviews: 1
Location: Australia
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Mon May 10, 2004 4:36 am
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I have to tell you..... this fanfiction is the true A to infinity, "i-got-stuck-in-middlearth" saga and i am sooo happy to see Penny portrayed as we probably all would feel in her situation.
I had to physically stop myself from laughing really loudly about the barrel episode and all these elven warriors leaping for their swords and bows after a scream over cold water!!As i have ahd to do many times before that as well! Very funny stuff.
Onto the more serious side, i have read MANY fanfics but i have never read one, and it's sequel, that is so poignant in its complexity and the amount of research and lore that is presented in it is astounding. (Tuor is sooo lovable) You have a very unique and beautiful gift and i urge you to write a non-fanfic story and try and get it published.... there are over 100,000 fanfic writers in the world and only a hanfdul write as beautifully as you do!!
I have a couple of questions though... will Penny be made to sing my Lindir? I hope so! (perhaps she could remember a song from LOTR - i.e. the Lay of Nimrodel or Elbereth Gilthoniel!" Will she meet Halbarad's sons soon? Will she meet Eowyn? (i really would lover her to, she is my favourite!)
Anyway, may you keep writing, and may Penny keep surviving!!
~ Your Whyte Ivy
P.s. thank Iluvatar - Penny gets motion sickness, if that does not make her real, i don't know what will! |
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Isilme

Joined: 04 Mar 2004 Reviews: 17
Location: The Netherlands
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Mon May 10, 2004 9:33 am
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Yay, the sequel has already begun! I love it so far, and am very curious to see where this is going. Is there going to be some major action and adventure or maybe evan a Penny/? romance??? Can't wait to find out....
You Rock!
Greetz,
Isilme |
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Ania

Joined: 08 Sep 2003 Reviews: 55
Location: Britain
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Wed May 12, 2004 6:04 am
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| Boz, one of the things that I find so appealing about this style of writing is that it presents the elves on such a believeable level and your presentation of all the elves seems just so appropriate, it's such a great piece of writing and engagingly written, very well done again. (Loved the Erestor bit and Penny's growing friendship with Lindir) |
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Irith
Joined: 02 Feb 2004 Reviews: 14
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Mon May 17, 2004 12:16 am
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| Yea! A sequel. Am so happy now! |
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