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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
Sun Apr 11, 2004 10:56 am
Seems sweet if not a little short and hyper. Go easy on the coffee and chocs!

Watch the modernisms and spelling. Finod looks like it should be Finrod and that will get you shot. No one should mess with the Felagund! Valor is Valar.

Oh, and why does your OFC have a name ending in 'a'. Thats isnt a correct elvish name.
 
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pg74
Joined: 08 Jul 2003
Reviews: 21
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Sun Apr 11, 2004 4:39 pm
Aside from all that said above, the entertainment potential is high. Try a beta to help get the kinks out. Good luck with your story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
 
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