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ceebee
Joined: 21 Mar 2004
Reviews: 2
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Mon Apr 12, 2004 7:17 pm
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Wonderful! I really loved this story. The Haldir/Illume story was fantastic, but honestly what held me was the creatures ... you portray them so clearly and cleverly!
This was beautiful. I'd really like to read more of your work -- if you've got any archived anywhere else, please let me know where I may find it. Thanks so much for this fantastic tale. |
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AzureDragoness
Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Tue Apr 13, 2004 4:35 pm
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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *breaks out in joyful squeals* IloveitIloveitILOVEIT! My god, that was good. *bows to the almighty god of writing* I love it. Between the animals and the fun sex, tis a work of art. |
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Havetoist
Joined: 14 Apr 2004
Reviews: 29
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Sat Apr 17, 2004 1:09 am
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I have been trying to understand what it is about Legends that I cannot let go of. I go back and read it again and again….like niggling a loose tooth. There is an ache to your story. Something deliciously painful, fragile and ethereal that I cannot let go of.
I think of that poem by Robert Frost – they cannot scare me with their talk of space between stars…it’s the spaces in your story that haunt me. What is not said, and what is – the space and the stars. “Cold driven man, cold driven elf”. That hurts to read. It hurts because you have convinced me it is true.
Brava. |
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rossui
Joined: 17 Apr 2004
Reviews: 10
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Sun Apr 18, 2004 2:00 pm
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| Outstanding! Loved the creatures - wonderful characterizations there. And I love to see Haldir being saved from himself, arrogant adorable bastard that he is. |
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inglor
Joined: 26 Apr 2004
Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Tue May 11, 2004 9:12 am
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I thoroughly enjoyed this. I especially like some of your descriptions: "a silver shard in the sky", "dewy coupling", etc. ,very descriptive.
Impressive
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Mija
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 16
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Sun May 16, 2004 2:59 am
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Wonderful, just wonderful. Very nicely writtten and I love the way you portrayed the different animals and the dragon. Very nice indeed.
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marcia
Joined: 10 Jun 2004
Reviews: 53
Location: California
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Mon Jul 12, 2004 12:54 pm
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I, too, love this story and thank you for writing and sharing it. The dragon (my favorites, always, whether nasty or nice) was delightful. The Maia was delightful. You command of English is just about perfect, your imagery is, at least to me, very original and very powerful. The sex was extremely well written, restraint and heat and not at all the usual vocabulary. Kudos. Write more Haldir stories!!!!
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Tue Aug 17, 2004 8:36 am
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Amazing! Well written with wonderful descriptions - a true jewel!  |
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Yavanie
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
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Thu Sep 09, 2004 7:45 pm
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| Wow! what they said! Delightful descriptions, especially the animals!!! I think they are some of the best original characters I've had the pleasure of reading! I'll be watching what you post! A jewel of a read, and Haldir lives (we know PJ had it all wrong). Love the dragon (did I say that already?). Again, Wow! |
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Anieni
Joined: 27 Jan 2004
Reviews: 48
Location: Somewhere between fantasy and reality
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Thu May 12, 2005 3:25 pm
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My god!! This story is a jewel!! I have not been so happy to find a fic in a VERY long time. Probably one of the best stories I have read here.
I am conpletely infatuated with your characters, gosh I really am!! The story, the descriptions, the pace, the characters it is just..... I am speechelss!
I can only hope now that I will find more stories written by you. |
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