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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004 Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
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Sat Apr 17, 2004 12:29 am
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| Lovely work, Marta! |
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
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Sat Apr 17, 2004 2:49 pm
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Oh, envious heart, so long thwarted!
Very nifty! |
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Elvenesse

Joined: 03 Sep 2003 Reviews: 8
Location: UK
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Mon Jul 26, 2004 10:25 am
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| A twisted romance indeed. I'm still giggling. |
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MaglorRedeemed
Joined: 01 Aug 2004 Reviews: 11
Location: The land of Mormons, green Jell-O and Orson Scott Card
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Mon Aug 30, 2004 6:15 pm
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Hahahaha! This was great. Poor Lobelia, she sure had to take a lot of crap to get herself into that hole.  |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Wed Sep 01, 2004 6:01 am
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Oh, what a tangled web we weave
When first we practice to believe
That our love, though tender hearted
Can so easily be thwarted
For e'en though we get our heart's desire
Too often it's consumed by fire
The one that burns and blinds our sights
To other of the world's delights
What scheming she does, and all for naught! Bilbo returns and snatches away her only love. How heart rending! This was amusing to say the least. Thank you. |
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
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Mon Oct 17, 2005 11:52 am
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| A very nice poem Marta! You capture Lobelia very well! |
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MrsAnalytica

Joined: 24 May 2013 Reviews: 45
Location: Belgium
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Mon Jun 03, 2013 9:07 am
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"To husband's aunt's fair hole: oh, what a thrill!"
I know, I KNOW it's about a hobbit hole, but dirty images still came into my mind. Forgive me. I loved this, by the way. |
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