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batsojopo

Joined: 04 Apr 2004
Reviews: 6
Location: Texas
Sat Apr 17, 2004 6:37 pm

Very interesting start. I've always liked stories of how Celeborn and Galadriel meet. Eagerly waiting for more Smile smiley face
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sun Apr 18, 2004 8:15 am

Very interesting. I find it a little confusing that you didn't use their names as we know them today, cause it makes me think of other characters. Anyway, I find it great and I can't wait for more! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Mon Apr 19, 2004 6:02 pm

It's great! now he has to stick with her and they "hate" each other... lol! I loved the last paragraph! It was really funny and I admire your sense of humour. Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
Mon May 24, 2004 7:36 am

You get extra points for using Finrod!! Very Happy smiley face

Great idea and well executed! Nice touches with the names.
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sat May 29, 2004 5:28 am

Great! But to damn short! lol. It's evolving very nicely... update soon! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Mon May 31, 2004 2:52 pm

*claps* Wonderful! Great! But too short! PLease update SOON! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face

(though loving the fast updates, I want more) Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Mon May 31, 2004 5:57 pm

This is great! I don't know too much about menegroth since I only read the silmarilion once and that was a while ago but from what remember you're throwing in a lot of cannon which I really like. I think its neat to see little details worked into larger backstories. I like the charactierization and I think the tension is very much what it would have been between a sidarin lord and a noldorin lady. Looking forward to more updates.
 
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
Sat Jun 05, 2004 10:09 am

Wave smiley face
Great job. Galadriel/celeborn are always nice. And you have full points for not making him a weak, decorative character.
 
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Mistaria

Joined: 15 Jul 2004
Reviews: 3
Location: USA
Thu Jul 15, 2004 8:20 am

This is really good so far! There are too few G/C fics out there. Please write more! Smile smiley face
 
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Mistaria

Joined: 15 Jul 2004
Reviews: 3
Location: USA
Fri Jul 30, 2004 10:51 am

(: Glad to see an update! This chapt. was good, definetly too short though! ::laughs:: Hopefully your muse will allow you to write more soon! (: Love and light.
 
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