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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Sat Jun 19, 2004 6:27 am
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Finally an update! Anyway, wonderful and hilarious. The secret was pretty obvious...lol. Still, very sweet! please, please update  !!!!!!!!!!!!!!  |
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AzureDragoness
Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Sat Jun 19, 2004 11:33 am
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Ack! You take long time-- bad! *menaces authoress with her Spatula of Doom* Ook, update took too long, bu me likies anyways. More soon, ASAP? I give you many bunnies to hurry you up 
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Annie103
Joined: 25 Apr 2004
Reviews: 11
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Sun Jun 20, 2004 3:18 pm
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| Yay more chapters! |
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Ania
Joined: 08 Sep 2003
Reviews: 55
Location: Britain
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Mon Jun 21, 2004 5:13 am
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| One thing that has really drawn me to this fic is that it's so endearing, I've really enjoyed your portrayal of the relationship between Legolas and Mara, it's believeable and you haven't got them falling in love from their first meeting as is quite common. Although some of the bits are non-canon, you've written them with enough sensitivity to portray them in a believable and poignant way. I really enjoyed this, well done so far and please update soon! |
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ancksunamun668
Joined: 08 Jun 2004
Reviews: 17
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Tue Jul 20, 2004 12:56 pm
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| Please, please, please update soon! This story has me entranced - it is so different from many other stories I have read - please update soon! |
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aveela
Joined: 15 Feb 2004
Reviews: 22
Location: New York
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Sun Aug 15, 2004 8:13 pm
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ooh ooh!!! sequel sequel!!!!
that was really sweet, but you had me nervous for a minute there.... i thought she was going to turn him down!!!! eeek!
i love it!, but i hope you follow it up... i actually want to see what reactions aldeon and thranduil would have to the announcement.... hmmm |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Wed Aug 18, 2004 7:52 pm
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Awww, what a really great ending! I loved it! You did a wonderful job with this story. I'm hoping for a sequel **crosses fingers and hopes** but if not, I'm looking forward to reading your future stories. Thanks for writing such a great story
Michelle... |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Wed Jun 29, 2005 8:32 pm
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Wow! i just ran accross this, and all I can say is What A Story!!!!!! The whole thing was absolutely amazing, and you did an incredible job with the first-person style of writing! This is a story that I know I'll keep coming back to. The characters were so real! I swear I was experiencing everything right along with Mara. Great job!!!!!  |
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Anieni
Joined: 27 Jan 2004
Reviews: 48
Location: Somewhere between fantasy and reality
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Sat Aug 20, 2005 9:56 pm
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I should be ashamed of myself for not finishing this story before!! But I am so happy with it I can't help but grin like an idiot, perfect LIL ONE!!
Love and huggles!
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NobleBone
Joined: 17 May 2005
Reviews: 6
Location: Like you care
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Sun Oct 23, 2005 3:09 pm
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I really liked the plot, but I thought some of the dialogue was very cliched and could have been done more originally. I found myself scanning through a lot of the paragraphs. If you could cut down on all of the unneccessary parts/words, I think this story would really improve.  |
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