Reviews for "When Does Happily Ever After Begin?"

Wed Apr 21, 2004 4:17 pm

I really liked your story. I just wish it didn't have to end!

Wed Apr 21, 2004 7:50 pm

The end was not unbelievable! Eru, you had me crying near the end, thinking they'd both die heart-broken... I loved your story. The plot was very interesting and the characters well described. My only "negative" (not really) comment is that sometimes the chapters were too long, and could have been two. Anyway, it was an enchanting story and I loved how you described their emotions! I'm a hopeless romantic, so the end made me cry... but it was beautiful beyond belief! *sniff* Very Happy smiley face

Thu Apr 22, 2004 10:25 am

No flames from me, I'm a sucker for a happy ending too. I'm glad Rhiannon finally came to her senses, look at what she would have missed out on! LOL

A well told tale, thanks so much for writing and sharing it with us. *vbg*

Thu Apr 22, 2004 12:57 pm

Thanks pg74, Monaleoht, and Duchess for your kind words. This was not my first attempt at writing, but it was my first fanfic. I really appreciate the praise.

Thu Apr 22, 2004 2:25 pm

Oh My!! What a story! I started reading it and could not stop until I was fineshed. Great Job of story telling. Now I have to try and find another story somewhere here that can keep me interested as well as this one did. Thanks to the writer.
AragornDreamer

Sat Apr 24, 2004 6:59 pm

this story was truely captivating..........i agree with you immensly that i am sometimes a sucker for happy endings..... Very Happy smiley face

.......I couln't stop reading this beautifully discriptive tale....... Jester smiley face

......i loved the intense reaction of legolas......i truely believe that he was dying until i reached the end and found that not only the story ended in happily ever after (which is rare), but also that the ending gave hope of true love...... Big Hug smiley face

.....a truely amazing tale for a first time fanfic writer.. Wink smiley face

Wed May 05, 2004 5:39 pm

I've read and re-read it a couple of times and thoroughly enjoyed it. I loved the humor and interaction between the characters. Your story is very engaging and pulls the reader through the gamit of emotions. Definitely hooked me!

Fri Jul 30, 2004 1:00 am

What a happy ending?! Great characters, fun plot, and a fine romantic story....Quite an enjoyable tale.

Thanks for all of the hard work,
Mina Sedh, Hisie Lome

Sun Sep 12, 2004 1:14 pm

Mmm...good story, although the end was a bit *too* happy maybe...(okay I admit I loved it lol).

Thu Oct 13, 2005 12:31 am

Thank you for the lovely ending. I despaired of happiness for Legolas for most of the story because your elleth was so stubborn, stupid and cowardly. Glad to see Legolas get a mate.

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