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Maram68

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 114
Location: West from East
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Mon Jun 16, 2003 8:39 pm
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I bow to the Mistress ... wonderfully written! It is excatly what goe strhough my head when I think of typical LOTR-Sues: Elven names over 12 letters, every possible relation to anybody of the Fellowship, perfection beyond belief!!!! Is there a sequel?
Thanks Viv, you made my night! |
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Ellbee

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 24
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Mon Jun 16, 2003 9:09 pm
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| LMAO! You give "Lay of Luthien" an entirely new meaning. Finally, a plausible reason for Luthien-worship. I love it, especially Mairi-whachamajigger's ever-changing name. Is there more? I sincerely hope so. -Ell |
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Scribe

Joined: 15 Sep 2003 Reviews: 40
Location: Betelgeuse
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Mon Jun 16, 2003 10:59 pm
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| RLMAO! Bendy! Chocolate lembas fondue...I'm at work and I'm struggling not to laugh my ass off while I'm reading this. Bloody brilliant. Take a bow girl! |
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alias
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 17
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Mon Jun 16, 2003 11:30 pm
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| lol hilarious story |
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003 Reviews: 103
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Tue Jun 17, 2003 3:33 pm
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| Oh yes - let me cry all over you Legolas and heal your wounds with my healing tears. LMAO. And Gimli is a hoot. And the only reason he doesn't like her is because she hasn't got a beard right? |
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Andreth
Joined: 25 Oct 2003 Reviews: 107
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Sat Dec 13, 2003 9:43 pm
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| Yet another example of your entertaining, acid wit!! I think you hit every cliche in the book...the shifting name throughout was the perfect touch. |
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Zimraphel

Joined: 23 Sep 2003 Reviews: 3
Location: Burbank, CA
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Wed Jan 21, 2004 7:44 pm
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| I KNEW those Elves all had to like Lúthien for some reason OTHER than that she was pretty. Ha! She can drink dear Uncle Manwë under the table--love it! |
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Thu Mar 18, 2004 12:15 pm
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Now, this is UNFAIR! I wanna see Gimli kick her lil' behind!
And this line was pure genius:
Gimli nodded. Arwen was very wise.
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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
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Tue Jan 25, 2005 9:28 am
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I've had to try and read this before the library security guard comes round again and ticks me off for sniggering again. (apparantly, when I am reading your stories, I am distracting the other students by my giggling ). I just read the orc story, and this is equally as great. I've read quite a few sue parodies a while back, but this one is my favourite so far, because I do think it's unfair that they never bother with Gimli (and would think he would have lice ), so it's nice to see him get his own back. And I have to agree with the other reviewers. The thing that struck me really was Luthien. I have much more respect for her now. You should write the true story of Luthien and Beren along those lines I thought I was going mad for a minute though with the girl's name, until I realised it was deliberate. Very clever.  |
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004 Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
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Wed Feb 16, 2005 3:46 pm
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Do you think you missed out on anything a Sue does? I don't think. It was terribly funny Viv. Claps all around (we have no clapping smiley!) I will just have to bow before the master. I read two of your stories at break today - this one and Red Dawn. I am glad I read this one last. It made me laugh through my tears. Bravo!!  |
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