Joined: 21 Apr 2004 Reviews: 46
Location: Western Washington State
Sat May 08, 2004 12:40 pm
What a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it!
Auli
Joined: 30 Jun 2004 Reviews: 5
Location: London
Wed Jun 30, 2004 7:31 pm
An absolutely brilliant poem which has really captured LothÃriel's feelings about her birth-city and also where she subsequently resides with her husband. Amazing, fantastic, brilliant.
Rous
Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Fri Aug 27, 2004 10:30 pm
I must admit I was put off by the lack of rhyming. However, the flow and imagery is so intense, I found the lack of rhyme inconsequentual. Very lovely and well done. Thank you.