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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Wed Jun 18, 2003 6:40 pm
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| What a delightful story. Your writing style is exquisite, and your sense of the canon characters very true. Legolas and Gimli spoke like... well, Legolas and Gimli. There were a few deviations from canon, but I'm sure you know what they are and did them on purpose. Of course, I want to find Entville and walk in the trees there. What a glorious image. But the most impressive part of this story was the pace. Easy, soft, even during the battle scenes. Through the vast majority of the story, the whole tone was one of a fading world. At the end, the scenes in Valinor were almost too bright and giddy to read. JRR would like that difference, I think. So did I. |
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alon
Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 2
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Wed Jun 18, 2003 7:04 pm
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I loved this story when I first read it at ff.net. I'm very pleased to see it here. I highly recommend everyone who enjoys well-written OCs read this story!!!
peace...adrienne |
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Maram68
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 114
Location: West from East
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Thu Jun 19, 2003 6:49 pm
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| Dear Jen, I must confess that though you got me initially hooked with Forgotten allies, I am now absolutely enthralled by this story. It is wonderful. Thank you! |
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molokai
Joined: 03 Jul 2003
Reviews: 9
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Wed Jul 16, 2003 1:07 am
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| B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! I love the pace. The romance developed quite nicely. I truly enjoyed how the friendship grew between Legolas and Elesia ...and without smut. Your story was my first experience of Valinor. I'm sad it had to end. Thank you for sharing your gift of writing. |
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Duchess
Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
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Sun Apr 04, 2004 7:03 pm
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What a sweet story! I loved it and will recommend it to everyone I know with a love of LotR fanfic.
Nicely done!  |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Sun Apr 11, 2004 9:20 am
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| Ahah~! I knew I recognized this. Thus be known that i loved this fic and read this one when the Two Towers came out... BUAHAHAHA... WONDERFUL fic~! |
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didreamsgreen
Joined: 12 Jul 2004
Reviews: 5
Location: CA, USA
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Mon Jul 26, 2004 4:13 am
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| WOW. I am truly impressed. Not many stories can make me feel heartache like your story did for some moments. From the description i thought it only to be action/adventure, but i was pleasently surprised with the realistic romance that came to life. Your writing is better than most published romance writers i know. I look forward to reading anything new you post since i have read and loved all of your stories. |
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Concetta
Joined: 22 Mar 2004
Reviews: 25
Location: Maryland, USA
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Tue Sep 07, 2004 2:32 pm
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Absolutely gorgeous!!!!!!!! I actually got upset and had an expression of horror on my face when Elesia fell in the water, I was like, no! no! no! It can't end this way!!! Thankfully it didn't! So sweet!!!!
Ciao! |
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ArtanisOrangeBlossom
Joined: 07 Nov 2004
Reviews: 96
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Thu Dec 30, 2004 11:53 pm
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*speechless for a moment*
not even ROTK made me feel that wonderful heartache of the softness of Elesia's mortality and the hardness of Legolas' immortality....it really steals your breath at the saddness and the sweet......the sweet feel of the story.
wonderful job.
~Christina |
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