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ViJanaway

Joined: 07 May 2004
Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
Thu Aug 19, 2004 8:12 pm
I think you did well getting into his head and letting us know about the price of war from his thoughts.
Thank you.
Vi
 
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thegraybluebird
Joined: 02 Oct 2004
Reviews: 47
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Sun Dec 19, 2004 2:05 am
Very sad indeed...I felt like I could just be standing there from afar and watching Eomer, wondering what thoughts were going through his mind. Now I can picture it even better. Nice piece..
 
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Drew

Joined: 13 Feb 2005
Reviews: 6
Location: England
Sun Feb 13, 2005 9:13 am
I liked it very much. The detail, the graphics, I loved it all. You can smell, hear and touch the battle...Wonderful

Drew
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Mon Oct 20, 2008 4:59 am
Very vivid and insightful. I've always loved that kind of fics that allows the reader to smoothly get into the mind of the character. You did an awesome job here. Besides that, I love how you let the reader see, touch and smell the battle and everything that was going on around. Excellently done!
 

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Last edited by dolarabee on Mon Oct 20, 2008 11:18 pm
Author's replied on Wed Dec 31, 1969 7:00 pm
Thanks, Binka. I wish I still had the time to do this.
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