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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sat May 01, 2004 11:27 am

Beautiful. Elegant and touching. Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Tue Nov 30, 2004 12:14 am

Very touching. And well done. But I did not understand the line, "It hurt enough that his wife had died without having to see his sons suffer in such a way." Maybe I read it wrong, but it seemed a little cruel and selfish to me. Other than that, I thought it very nice. Thank you for sharing.
 
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ViJanaway

Joined: 07 May 2004
Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
Sat Jan 29, 2005 1:21 pm

It is almost like a portent of things to come....but very well done.
 
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