Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sat May 01, 2004 11:27 am
Beautiful. Elegant and touching.
Rous
Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Tue Nov 30, 2004 12:14 am
Very touching. And well done. But I did not understand the line, "It hurt enough that his wife had died without having to see his sons suffer in such a way." Maybe I read it wrong, but it seemed a little cruel and selfish to me. Other than that, I thought it very nice. Thank you for sharing.
ViJanaway
Joined: 07 May 2004 Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
Sat Jan 29, 2005 1:21 pm
It is almost like a portent of things to come....but very well done.