Congratulations on your poem! All the facts and emotions in a nutshell.
Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sat May 01, 2004 11:18 am
*absolute silence*.............................................. it's so..........................elegant and well written........... I'm in shock..........
Chris
Joined: 04 May 2004 Reviews: 2
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Tue May 04, 2004 5:12 pm
OOHHH! DENETHOR POETRY!!! Cadi, I love you! (as if you didn't know that already... ) And I love this!
- Chris
HollyTook
Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 36
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Thu May 06, 2004 8:37 pm
Nice use of vocabulary and imagery! I can see you know what you're doing
~*Holly Took*~
NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Fri Jun 11, 2004 3:38 pm
Really excelent - I particularly like the frequent juxtapositions of opposites; they are very effective and provocative.