Reviews for "The Horn of Gondor"

Wed May 05, 2004 6:05 am

Beautiful! Elegant and charming, it conveyed true emotion..... Bunny smiley face

Wed May 05, 2004 7:51 am

That was lovely, a very nice look at the shattering effect of Boromir's death on those of his kin and his people. You may want to reread aloud for a few word omissions, but otherwise technically neat (and that counts in my book). Very nice, particularly amidst the overflowing excess of "Denethor the crazy and cruel" nonsense!

Wed May 05, 2004 11:01 am

Thank you! I must admit myself to not being entirely satisfied with it, so I may do some revision once I get feedback from various places! Smile smiley face

Fri May 07, 2004 4:59 pm

A very nice portrait of the grief experienced by Faramir and Denethor upon learning of Boromir's death. You have a clean style of writing which flows smoothly. And nothing like being treated to another and more nicely nuanced perspective of Denethor.

Fri Jun 11, 2004 3:36 pm

This story has lovely moments - the sound of the water, how grief is doubled, Denethor weeping into raven hair. I must say, I enjoy your compassionate and hopeful portrayals of Denethor, although they stretch canon, I think.

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