Joined: 21 Mar 2004 Reviews: 15
Location: california
Sun May 09, 2004 2:41 pm
the innocence in mireil at a younger age is so sweet and concerning........i do believe that inziladun knew of her future........
Calion is so distasteful marrying his own cousin against her will........although i would've wanted to know what happened between miriel and elendil. Did they have a courtship.....or were they forced to give up on thier love? ....
I think that inziladun is a man of great faith because he believed in something that his own father and brother chose to give up on.......mireil and her father have a relationship that is to be envied by all.......another beautifully written tale
Bravo
varialectio
Joined: 27 Jan 2004 Reviews: 4
Location: Barad-dur.
Wed May 12, 2004 4:34 pm
Ah, I love, love, LOVE this! I am a huge fan of the ancient Numenoreans and their civilization, and I have sadly found very little fanfic about them. I loved this story and I loved the "11th Hour". I find Numenor's heroes and villains to be fascinating and I would love it if you did a sequel to the "11th Hour". How about it?