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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sun May 09, 2004 3:13 pm
A good idea and pretty well executed. You need a beta, though, to clear up some misspellings and incomplete sentences. Revised, I would rate it much higher.
 
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ladyrheena
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 44
Location: Humming in the corner.
Fri May 14, 2004 9:04 am
Very good, nice characterisation. See if you can get a beta, though, since if you could eliminate the odd spelling errors etc. this would move up from "good" to "excellent." Nevertheless, well done, great effort!
 
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