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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Wed May 12, 2004 6:55 am
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| Excellent! this clandestine conversation caught me completely by surprise. I never would have imagined a meeting between these two happening in this way but once I started reading your words made me think it entirely plausible and real. You did a great job capturing Pippin - his kindness, pride, gratitude and love all together; and Eowyn I felt was very true to the book - terse and so expressive. With very few words you caught her feelings on life, war and Aragorn. Very Well Done! |
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Elentari
Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Wed May 12, 2004 1:15 pm
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Read this at Lj, but just had to leave my praise on the record.
Bloody awesome.
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Anna
Joined: 29 Jan 2004
Reviews: 108
Location: Sweden
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Wed May 12, 2004 2:49 pm
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Wow, this was absolutely marvellous! I love gap-fillers like this.
I, too, love bookverse Eowyn (movieverse Eowyn isn´t bad either) and IMHO you´ve portrayed her soo well! Pippin, too. But, Eowyn...oh, wow...amazing!! I am so very impressed.
I am in absolute awe over your ability to make me all caught up in such a short story. It takes great talent to keep it so simple, yet with such high quality.
Will there be a sequel of sorts? |
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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Wed May 12, 2004 6:48 pm
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| The first time I read this, I was impressed with Pippin's youth and Eowyn in general (I already told you this). But this time, that last line from Pippin just wolloped me. Was that why he was waiting there for her to wake? To thank her? How beautiful. |
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Maram68
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 114
Location: West from East
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Thu May 13, 2004 2:49 pm
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Darl, I loved this fic.
Apart from the fact is my favorite LOTR character (the Legolas-thingy is purely hormonal and blinded by maniac infatuation), I loved the way you came up with the meeting of Pippin and the White Lady. Again, I recognize the very same Eowyn I longed for while reading Tolkien and Pippin is lovely, very in character and I can see both before my eyes.
Thank you!
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queenoftheshire
Joined: 03 Dec 2003
Reviews: 19
Location: Catching Birds with a Pool Skimmer
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Fri May 14, 2004 5:11 pm
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I've been waiting for this Challenge Entry! To put it simple, it was everything I hoped for! Short and Sweet!  |
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SilverMoonLady
Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
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Fri May 21, 2004 10:10 am
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Very nice! That was a very enjoyable read, I really felt for Eowyn. Everything seems to remind her of what she has lost, even Pippin's attempts to thank her. Very well expressed!  |
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saborice
Joined: 11 Jun 2004
Reviews: 33
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Sun Jun 13, 2004 1:12 pm
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| Awesome, totally awesome! I love how Eowyn and Pippin's conversation is so innocent. |
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Yavanie
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
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Sun Jun 13, 2004 1:48 pm
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The only change, not change: refinement, I would suggest is when Pippin says to Eowyn "My friends call me Pippin and so should you" I would change to something more like "my friends call me pippin and I would be honored if you would too"
hobbits being so very courteous and he so in awe of the lady.
my two cents, but I do certainly agree, in just a few lines of text you pulled me right into the room, eavesdropping on their conversation! well done.
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