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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
Fri May 21, 2004 8:11 am

This was lovely. Reminded me of the scene in Titanic where Rose died and rejoined all the dead. Very poignant.

Few wee punctuation upsets, but then we all commit those.

Nice, original and well executed - certainly rates more than 3 stars! Im bumping this up to 4 stars!
 
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elvennienna
Joined: 28 Jan 2004
Reviews: 2
Location: Belgium
Fri May 21, 2004 9:28 am

Waaw. Gives me a warm feeling inside. Praise the Valar for stories such as this! very well done, true to character and just what I need right now. No love is ever lost.
 
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ladyrheena
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 44
Location: Humming in the corner.
Fri May 21, 2004 3:31 pm

Aww, real nice. Sweet, poetic style too. Kudos!
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sat May 22, 2004 10:45 am

Amazing! *crys softly* wonderfullly written.. so beautiful! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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ViJanaway

Joined: 07 May 2004
Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
Thu Jul 29, 2004 2:21 pm

AS it should be...Quite nicely done...Sweet....Beautiful.... Exclamation smiley face Exclamation smiley face Exclamation smiley face
 
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Aerin

Joined: 16 Jun 2004
Reviews: 22
Location: ORLI\'S LIPS are distracting me
Thu Jul 29, 2004 3:31 pm

Very nice job. I enjoyed your use of elvish, the sound of the story was perfect. Wink smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Thu Jul 29, 2004 9:50 pm

Very well done. Captured the loss very nicely. Thank you. Lurk smiley face Drunk smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Mar 13, 2006 8:36 am

Hmmm, I recognized this about half-way through. However, an excellent story deserves another look. And, it is just as wonderful as the first time. Thank you for sharing. And, another round of popcorn and Buttershots.
 
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krazykataave

Joined: 17 Dec 2004
Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
Mon Mar 13, 2006 1:10 pm

Extremely touching. Very imaginative and executed well - really descriptive that i had didn't have to use my imagination at all to actually be there.
 
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