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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
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Fri May 21, 2004 8:11 am
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This was lovely. Reminded me of the scene in Titanic where Rose died and rejoined all the dead. Very poignant.
Few wee punctuation upsets, but then we all commit those.
Nice, original and well executed - certainly rates more than 3 stars! Im bumping this up to 4 stars! |
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elvennienna
Joined: 28 Jan 2004 Reviews: 2
Location: Belgium
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Fri May 21, 2004 9:28 am
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| Waaw. Gives me a warm feeling inside. Praise the Valar for stories such as this! very well done, true to character and just what I need right now. No love is ever lost. |
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ladyrheena
Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 44
Location: Humming in the corner.
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Fri May 21, 2004 3:31 pm
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| Aww, real nice. Sweet, poetic style too. Kudos! |
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Sat May 22, 2004 10:45 am
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Amazing! *crys softly* wonderfullly written.. so beautiful!  |
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ViJanaway

Joined: 07 May 2004 Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
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Thu Jul 29, 2004 2:21 pm
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AS it should be...Quite nicely done...Sweet....Beautiful....  |
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Aerin

Joined: 16 Jun 2004 Reviews: 22
Location: ORLI\'S LIPS are distracting me
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Thu Jul 29, 2004 3:31 pm
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Very nice job. I enjoyed your use of elvish, the sound of the story was perfect.  |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Thu Jul 29, 2004 9:50 pm
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Very well done. Captured the loss very nicely. Thank you.  |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 8:36 am
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| Hmmm, I recognized this about half-way through. However, an excellent story deserves another look. And, it is just as wonderful as the first time. Thank you for sharing. And, another round of popcorn and Buttershots. |
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krazykataave

Joined: 17 Dec 2004 Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 1:10 pm
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| Extremely touching. Very imaginative and executed well - really descriptive that i had didn't have to use my imagination at all to actually be there. |
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