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ladyjouster
Joined: 07 Feb 2004 Reviews: 12
Location: Georgia, US
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Tue Aug 10, 2004 6:49 am
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Too short! Excellent chapter but it was too short!  |
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MysteriousWays

Joined: 26 May 2004 Reviews: 19
Location: USA
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Tue Aug 10, 2004 1:08 pm
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WAAAAHHHHHHHHH
I have one serious issue with this story and that is that it is not finsihed yet!!!!
Every chapter I do this to myself, get all excited read it, I am way into it, and then it is done. I should go take up smoking or somthing. Are they going to be together or not?
MysteriousWays- stalks off grumbling in a complimentory way. |
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MysteriousWays

Joined: 26 May 2004 Reviews: 19
Location: USA
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Sun Aug 15, 2004 10:16 am
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Oh YES! YES YES!!!!
LOL
It is unfortunate that I do not smoke as I feel I need a cigarette now. Perhaps some chocolate instead.
That was just so increadibly well done. Most sensual, loving, tender. Just the perfect amount of detail was given to convey the intensity of the event. I am so happy for Miran and Legolas. But I am getting nervous too. I just know something not happy is coming.
Everytime I read a chapter of this I want to quote back favorite bits but it is so hard to say what my favorite bit is. The part of Gimli catching Legolas with straw in his hair was adorable. But it is your gift for so vividly describing the emotions of Miran and Legolas that really get to me.
Bravo Bravo Bravo.
MysteriousWays- My is is warm in here. |
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Aerin

Joined: 16 Jun 2004 Reviews: 22
Location: ORLI\'S LIPS are distracting me
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Sun Aug 15, 2004 3:02 pm
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| oooh sexy! l love the way you perfectly represent Gimli! |
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Aerin

Joined: 16 Jun 2004 Reviews: 22
Location: ORLI\'S LIPS are distracting me
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Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:46 pm
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Kendra, you and your damn cliffs. what are you gonna give us out door elf/woman sex and change the rating?????  |
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
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Mon Aug 30, 2004 11:41 am
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Oh how I love this fic so far and am truly hoping you're still working on it, that your muse has not deserted you. Please say you're still writing? *pleading look*
This is a darling tale of Legolas falling in love with a perfectly believable character in the daughter of King Theoden by his mistress. I like Miran a lot and hope she gets to live a good long time with Legolas by her side. And when it comes time to face Thranduil, WHY can't the couple already be married? I really don't see any good reason for wasting precious time! *nodding emphatically* |
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
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Sat Sep 04, 2004 10:55 pm
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This appeared in my inbox just as I was shutting the computer down for the night. LOL
I have to be brief in saying only how much I loved this and hope like mad they don't get in trouble for it. Gimli is a DEAR friend, isn't he? *giggle fit* I'll be back sometime tomorrow to edit this feedback into something longer and more fitting. *vbg* |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Sun Sep 05, 2004 11:20 am
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Lovely chapter, Kendra.
Gimli's devotion as a friends is...commendable????? HEHE...What a great friend!
You've captured Legolas's and Miran's stolen moment together, beautifully. Their passion and love for one another really came through in this chapter. I can't wait for your next update...I really do love this enchanting story
Keep up the good work, and update soon,
Michelle...... |
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Aerin

Joined: 16 Jun 2004 Reviews: 22
Location: ORLI\'S LIPS are distracting me
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Wed Sep 08, 2004 10:08 pm
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| Kendra, that was the best Love Scene that Middle Earth has ever seen. Absolutely wonderful smut, and I laughed my ass off at the same time! That was Great! |
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ladyjouster
Joined: 07 Feb 2004 Reviews: 12
Location: Georgia, US
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Sun Sep 19, 2004 9:55 am
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Another wonderful chapter. Yea!!!!!!!!!!!
Interesting idea on Miran taking a hand. I'd wondered what had happened in Edoras when Eowyn decided to run off to battle instead of going to the Hall. I can see interesting consequences arrising from all of this.....................
LJ |
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