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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Sun Sep 19, 2004 10:59 am
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Wow! So, Miran is going to try and rule in the absence of her family...this should be VERY interesting. I can't wait to see how her kinsmen will react.
Another great chapter, Kendra! I'm completely hooked
I'm certainly looking forward to your next update... I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next.
Update soon, and keep up the outstanding work!
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MysteriousWays

Joined: 26 May 2004 Reviews: 19
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Mon Sep 20, 2004 8:51 am
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Another perfectly handled chapter!!!
You have yet to disapoint me in your work. I have long since gotten to the point where I can believe that the romance between Miran and Legolas actually happened. You have woven it that smoothly into canon.
The parting of Miran and Legolas was perfect to the characters, not too mushy. Miran's issues with Eowyn's abandonment of assigned duties is absolutely perfect. I look forward to seeing how the lovely and brave Miran handles the situation.
"Nightengale" is a lovely word, but to have that velvety Legolas voice uttering "Dulin" is even better. I get all swoony thinking of it.
Tell me do you have any real life person in mind when you describe Miran? Or is there an actor or someone that comes close to looking the way you see her? Is she modeled after yourself? I have an OC that is definately modeled after me in looks, another is an elf that if y ou could se her would look pretty much like Gwyneth Paltrow, then I have yet another OC that is modeled after no one.
Well, I guess I need to move on and get back to keeping busy until the next installment.
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
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Sat Oct 02, 2004 7:32 pm
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Awww, I LOVE it that he called her his Nightengale. *wistful sigh*
Please please please let all be well with Miran and no one hurt her in her family's absense. I worry about her reaction to the news of her father's death, wishing Legolas could be there for her, to comfort her. Will she at least hear it from Eomer?
And when all is said and done and Legolas comes to claim her, will Eomer let her go where her father wouldn't? *hoping so*
Thank you for the update! I'm sorry I haven't had a chance to read and review before now. Real life kicking in with a vengeance again. *rueful chuckle* |
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Aerin

Joined: 16 Jun 2004 Reviews: 22
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Tue Oct 05, 2004 9:26 pm
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| I sighed with happieness when he called her his nightengale. Seriously you had me at hello! And now, this new chapter, Theoden, a softie. I am so glad! oooh, you and your cliffies I repeat again!!!! I love this story. |
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MysteriousWays

Joined: 26 May 2004 Reviews: 19
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Wed Oct 06, 2004 9:22 am
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Woohoo!!!! They are together again!!!
So they have Theoden's approval, so what happens next? Do they ride off into the sunset? Does Mirin for some strange reason decide to stay put? Do they move into the mountains and start a school for long lost heirs to thrones who when they reach adulthood return to kick their wicked Uncle's butt and restore proserity to their kingdoms?
Sorry, that was all compleatly uncalled for. I was just so giddy to get a new and happy chapter I got carried away.
Thank you for having Theoden give his approval. I love Theoden and I would have been unhappy if he went to his death being a horse's patute about Mirin and Legolas.
My favorite detail of he story. Mirin skidding to a halt at the last minute because she did not want to appear too eager. THAT WAS SO SWEET AND FUNNY!!!
I really do love Mirin and Legolas, I hope they get to live relatively happily ever after.
Thank You for writing this.
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 187
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Wed Oct 06, 2004 12:27 pm
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You minx, you stopped the story right where we all wanted you to continue! LOL
Loved this and what a wonderful surprise that Theoden gave them his approval before he passed. Darling, just darling! *vbg*
Now they will have to deal with Thranduil. How will you have him take the news? *very curious now* |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Wed Oct 06, 2004 12:32 pm
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Aww, how sweet it is! They actually have the approval of Miran's father. Although, I doubt that it would have mattered to Miran whether they had it or not Judging from her display of "eagerness" at Legolas's arrival, she would probably do just about anything to be with the one she loves. Oh, and what was up with Eomer and his "curt nod?" Does he disapprove of their relationship?
Their reunion was so sweet... ***sighs*** Update soon
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Tara
Joined: 29 May 2004 Reviews: 18
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Sun Oct 10, 2004 5:29 pm
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Ok last update was the 6th today is the 10th is it too soon to ask for another chapter?  |
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
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Wed Oct 20, 2004 5:05 am
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Warm and fuzzy fluff, LOVELY! *happy sigh*
You do realize we now want another story that gives us their wedding and settling in, don't you? *vbg* Please, as soon as ever you can? *hopeful look* |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Wed Oct 20, 2004 10:14 am
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YAAYYYYYYY!
What a great...ending?? Yaaaayyyyyyyyy!!!!!! I'm so happy that Miran and Legolas will be starting their life together. I started to get a little worried when Miran mentioned Legolas's inevitable sailing to the West. Whew...I love happy endings!
You've done an amazing job on this story. I was completely enchanted by it from the beginning, all the way to the end. Your writing is so descriptive, and the emotions of your characters are conveyed so well. And the love scenes! Let's not even get me started on those! Each of the love scenes that you've written for this story, actually serves a purpose...to show the love and desperate passion between Legolas and Miran. If that was indeed your intention, then you definitely succeeded. Very well done!
Keep writing. I'll be looking out for your next story...perhaps a sequel?
I love this story, and I thank you for sharing it with us
Michelle.... |
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