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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Mon May 31, 2004 7:41 am
Whew! somewhat awkwardly told, I thought, but right to the point about war - the compassion and the selfishness and the loss; things that should never be forgotten or pushed aside.
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Mon May 31, 2004 8:59 am
A little, well, not exactly a flowing piece but still it's very nice! Good job! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Thu Jun 03, 2004 2:35 pm
A very honest look as a hard reality: war often takes more than we want to give. The drabble is a tough format to work with, but you've tackled it nicely. Perhaps another quick pass to improve the flow?
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Saoirse

Joined: 17 Aug 2004
Reviews: 21
Location: In your closet
Mon Jan 10, 2005 7:21 pm
Oh, my. How very real, I am sure that what you said about "wishing it was another's loved one" is very true indeed.
 
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