Reviews for "My Heart"
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sindohte

Joined: 14 May 2003 Reviews: 157
Location: Rubbing up against an Elf
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Tue Jun 24, 2003 2:06 pm
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I enjoyed the story, but I am not certain about my feelings regarding the information revealed about the OC's past history. A revelation of this nature just really begs for a longer story and not a mere one chapter PWP? So can you please give me more?  |
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Tue Jun 24, 2003 6:59 pm
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This is the best one yet in your series, queenie. I dig. And feel free to expand, as sindohte suggested  |
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Krystallin
Joined: 26 Nov 2003 Reviews: 3
Location: Australia
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Tue Dec 09, 2003 8:54 am
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Oh boy Queenie hon, this is superb. I know we got a taste of it in a different forum, but reading it again, Phew! And its even better. You make me want him almost as much as Arababy!
Lovely. And I agree with Viv and Sindohte, I would love to see this expanded more!
Need I add to the chant of "More?" lol. Hugs.  |
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
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Fri Jun 04, 2004 6:50 pm
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I must admit I'm also intrigued by this character, her abilities you mention, that terrible past. WAS that a hint of the future Eomer had through this bond he appears to share with Rila, of her having his child? This one is most definitely begging for expansion. Please do consider the possibility?
And I loved it, btw. *vbg* |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Fri Nov 05, 2004 6:55 am
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| Just add my thoughts to all the others. Good story, but needs more space, needs to spread out. I hope by the time I have read it, you will have considered this. Thank you for sharing. |
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