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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004
Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
Fri Jun 04, 2004 4:49 pm

This is a delightful story! You really captured Sam's way of thinking and manner of speech, and your portrayal of Glorfindel is spot-on, in my opinion.

Just the small part alone where Glorfindel was thinking of, and discarding, ideas to amuse himself in the Hall of Fire shows the richness of your imagination.

Thank you for sharing this lovely story with us!
 
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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004
Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
Fri Jun 04, 2004 4:52 pm

Thank you for correcting the couple of typos I mentioned immediately! Not every author takes such pride in their work...
 

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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Fri Jun 04, 2004 6:50 pm

Very nice! Apart from few typos, a very enjoyable story! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Sat Jun 05, 2004 10:07 pm

Nifty! I enjoyed the portrayal of Glorfindel, amused, bored, admiring, refined, and deeply ancient, all in turn well contrasted with Sam's basic straightforward 'hobbitness' and devotion. I liked itSmile smiley face
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Mon Jun 07, 2004 3:20 pm

Typos gone! Yay! Still a charming story!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Yavanie

Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
Tue Jun 08, 2004 1:25 pm

Thumb smiley face Wow! your story is touching, well put together, great development and so in character. Great use of descriptive bocabulary: paints a picture but doesn't sound "wordy". You truly captured Samwise, and Glorfindel, Elrond was my favorite, but now maybe the balrog slayer, since I have come to know him better through your story. BRAVO!
 
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TrissMarigold

Joined: 12 Mar 2004
Reviews: 27
Location: the land of dreams
Sat Feb 26, 2005 1:45 pm

Great story! For me that was a perfect picture of Glorfindel. I loved the interaction between Sam and my favorite golden-haired elf Very Happy smiley face It fits so well with canon. Glorfindel is exactly the way i imagine him, too. Lovely! Are you, by any chance, writing some more stories about the Balrog slayer?? Bounce smiley face
 
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Thu Jan 19, 2006 5:41 pm

I'm sure I have reviewed this before, but obviously - not here (...?) maybe somewhere else Sad smiley face Apologies if I read and didn't review, - I especially enjoy this, it's one of my favorites and I've recommened to several other readers. I especially enjoy the characterizations and the interaction between Sam and Glorfindel.
 
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trekqueen
Joined: 07 Jul 2004
Reviews: 43
Location: Chambers of the Balrog Slayer
Thu Dec 14, 2006 12:35 pm

Absolutely beautiful piece Nancy and Anna! Being a great lover of the great Glorfindel I think you captured him magnificently. I also think your Sam is one of the best I've come across with his meandering and rambling words... catching just the right sound to his voice. Indeed he is a great weapon for Frodo against Sauron and the hordes of Mordor!

I must say I had a very similar idea for a future chapter in a future sequel to the Glorfindel piece I'm writing currently; however, it was going to be between Glorfindel and Bilbo when Blibo first came through Imladris after recovering Sting.

Again, wonderful and enjoyable to read your piece!
 
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