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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 9:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yavanie wrote:


I can so identify with this. I worked in a law office as a legal document specialist and title agent (think documents and closing papers for home mortgages).

anyway, it was my job to hire some office staff to help file paperwork, answer phones and take messages. So I brightly called the local university to send us some prelaw students or business students for some hands on temp work.


I went back to university last year as a mature student (so I'm now second year undergraduate, having miraculously managed to pass something last year, heh). I didn't think there would be a terrible divide between myself and the students coming straight from school, as there is only something like 7 or 8 years between us, but it's utterly amazed me how different we are. I have no idea what the standards of English teaching are nowadays, but, for instance in my first year Sources of Scots Law class, we were each told to do a presentation for the seminar group. (Mine was on direct effect of European legislation, but that's irrelevant).

Anyway we had to just stand up in front of 20 or so students and answer a question given out in the course documents. For students who were all intending to go into advocacy, it amazed me how many of them were poor speakers.

Similarly later in the year we had to do a group essay on legislative scrutiny. Our group decided to divide the work between us, write a section each, then combine it. One person volunteered to go over the finished article and tweak it so that it sounded like a coherent document rather than 5 separate essays (I actually volunteered, but was out voted). So after we each submitted the essay, I got the whole thing emailed to me - 'could I check the section on the EU that I helped the guy with, as he wasn't sure about EU scrutiny'.

So I started to read this thing. After three paragraphs, the beta in me screamed, and I got the red ink out. Again, these are folks who want to go into practising law, and yet cannot spell 'legislation', 'government' or 'statutory'. They had no idea where apostrophes were meant to live, or the difference between there / their / they're. I was slightly annoyed by that, as the grade for that essay counted towards our final mark.

I don't claim to be an expert when it comes to spelling or grammar. I know if you go through my stories you'll probably find weird mistakes that I've missed when I've beta'd them (as in general I work alone), but at least I know the basics, and if I'm not sure of something, I at least know to check.

So I can quite believe, Ya, that you would have trouble with law students. I expect you'd have the same trouble if you tried to recruit from our university, looking at some of my fellows.

(I'm aware I'm sounding very snotty right now, but my excuse is I have a cold and am grouchy, Laughing )

Edited to sort the HTML.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 9:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

NancyBrooke wrote:
FromJohn Prine, famously: "How the hell can a person go to work in the morning, come home every evening, and have nothing to say" and "If dreams were thunder, and lightning was desire, this house would have burnt down a long time ago."

That's the stuff drabbles are made of.


One of my favorite lines too. "Angel from Montgomery". Lots more in that one

I would start quoting songs I like but that would derail this thread.

Added after I read Spacey's above

I had one of those myself as a grad student in an undergrad marketing class. We had a group project that had a written component. I volunteered to put everything together... same results...

Did you guys hear that? Her stuff is self betaed... Spacey, you are a woman among infants. Bow

Warning to newbie writers (and not so newbie writers): Do not try this at home, she's a trained professional.


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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 9:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The local coffee shop here routinely rags on the stuff printed in the local editorials in the newspaper. They post comments on their display in front of the shop. yesterdays' :

"Conversate" is not a word."


I wonder what editor missed that?

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 11:29 am    Post subject: What do you think? Reply with quote

Ahem. Clears throat and rises on soapbox. Reading BlahBlah

I have seen these reasons for the lack of literacy, poor grammar, spelling, etc. today in several news articles. Do you agree?

1. Television, movies. Why read the book when you can watch the DVD? Never mind that the story was changed from the original. Why read a classic written in proper English with correct grammar that is “boring” when you can watch a show filled with 4-letter words, street slang, improper vocabulary and out and out garbage that sounds familiar to the ear? (Not all movies are like this, of course, but there are enough.)

2. Email, IM, Internet. Acronyms abound in messaging. Spell-checking and editing are bypassed as messages are dashed off in a hurry. We have all become slipshod and careless because we are in a hurry.

3. Hip-hop, rap music. Go ahead, throw your stones, but you must admit the music of today is worse than that of the 60s and 70s for language. Vernacular has creeped into our language to the point that most young people and some older folks are totally lacking in a decent vocabulary and can’t form a proper sentence.

4. School curriculums do not encourage reading for enjoyment. Essay writing is minimal in most reading classes at the primary level. Grammar and punctuation are taught for a few weeks instead of full years. Script (or handwriting) instruction is non-existent. As long as you can get it on paper, who cares what it looks like? John Hancock must be turning in his grave.

5. In Texas, curriculums are designed around the TAKS (formerly called TAAS) test. Students must pass this test in order to move to the next grade or graduate from high school. The test results also affect staffing and funding for schools. Students take practice tests and attend after school tutoring to make sure they will pass. This test was originally intended to evaluate students’ levels of achievement. Now it’s a pain you know where. Go figure.

6. News media has become fond of creating new words to sensationalize and emphasize news reports. So much is being put into printed word today that editors no longer “edit” for grammar, spelling and punctuation. They are concerned with content. How many news articles on Internet, in print or on television have poor grammar and incorrect spelling? How hard is it for authors to use a spell-checker?


In the literary market today, fiction accounts for less than 50% of book sales. Today’s reader purchases self-help, celebrity biographies, political exposes, and cookbooks. Would you believe science fiction/fantasy is about 1-2% of all sales?

Steps down from soapbox. Walking off into lurkdom. What do you think?

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 11:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Delynn wrote:
6. News media has become fond of creating new words to sensationalize and emphasize news reports. So much is being put into printed word today that editors no longer “edit” for grammar, spelling and punctuation. They are concerned with content. How many news articles on Internet, in print or on television have poor grammar and incorrect spelling? How hard is it for authors to use a spell-checker?


See it every day in our newsroom when I need to copy / paste parts of reporter's scripts. The absolute worst one I saw was in a package about Prince William being at St Andrews, and called him 'the heir to the thrown'. That ranked only slightly higher than a political correspondant spelling 'politicians' wrongly.

It's grammar though that I've noticed a lot in doing these shows - a lot of the script is just wrong, but is accepted and broadcast, so people hear that and assume, I think, that because it's on TV it must be correct (gone are the days of BBC standard Laughing )

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 1:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DeLynn, don't even get me started on the public school system in Texas, very sore subject with me. I am suprised they even let me in the front door of my kid's elementary school any more (oh Lord, here she comes again, could she possibly have any more complaints? like the first grade teacher can't spell tomarrow, or the educational diagnostician can't provide an educational evaluation in complete sentences, with proper grammar and correct spelling, but she's considered "the professional''?)[okay, off my soapbox]


ahem, anyway

no, we no longer teach our kids that there is a time a place for things, such as you can wear cut off jeans around the neighbor hood with your flip flops, but it is not appropriate - even if accepted now- that you wear said attire to church.

Howdy is an accepted greeting in Texas. But I wouldn't use it in formal correspondence!

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 1:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Damn kids, can't even spell...

Funny thing is, now that I have posted on this thread and had my share of box time, I am much more particular about my spelling and grammar. Like right now, I'm looking at this and wondering if it is correct...

Bleh,where's the crazy lady... oops I mean Ghetto when you need her! Save us from our boxes!


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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 3:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

SpaceWeavil wrote:
The absolute worst one I saw was in a package about Prince William being at St Andrews, and called him 'the heir to the thrown'. That ranked only slightly higher than a political correspondant spelling 'politicians' wrongly.


Yikes! That is so scary--journalism has truly gone down the tubes in the last decade or so.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 5:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oddly, I think that technology (e-mail, IM, etc.) might actually give rise to a return to good old-fashioned letter writing. On Saturday I checked the post and found a fat envelope from my sister. When I opened it, I found a seven-page handwritten letter. Apparently she's working a crappy temp job where she has nothing to do (other than watch a phone until it rings) and her employer logs all her keystrokes. So, to pass the time -- and to keep her nosy bosses out of her personal thoughts -- she started handwriting letters. They started off kind of choppy, and you can definitely tell where lunch break intrudes, but in general, I think the writing is fairly high-quality. It was a neato nostalgic wowie to read those things. I almost hope she doesn't get a more fulfilling job soon. Wink
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 5:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Viv wrote:
Oddly, I think that technology (e-mail, IM, etc.) might actually give rise to a return to good old-fashioned letter writing. On Saturday I checked the post and found a fat envelope from my sister. When I opened it, I found a seven-page handwritten letter. Apparently she's working a crappy temp job where she has nothing to do (other than watch a phone until it rings) and her employer logs all her keystrokes. So, to pass the time -- and to keep her nosy bosses out of her personal thoughts -- she started handwriting letters. They started off kind of choppy, and you can definitely tell where lunch break intrudes, but in general, I think the writing is fairly high-quality. It was a neato nostalgic wowie to read those things. I almost hope she doesn't get a more fulfilling job soon. Wink


Even with technology, I don't think anything can beat a proper letter. For one thing, it is solid and tactile, unlike an email or a phonecall. Just as an example, my mother goes to Egypt each year in July / August. This year she had some problem with her mobile phone and it locked her out, so that she couldn't make any outgoing calls. So instead of phoning, she wrote me a two page letter from her hotel.

Instead of getting a thirty second phonecall where neither of us could really understand the other over a bad line, I got a letter that actually made me cry. For one thing, she talked a lot about the July bombings in London, which they'd seen on the TV, and asked about my friends and all, and really showed me a side of her that I'd never really seen.

I know that sounds a bit smushy, but I honestly cried my eyes out, and all because of a letter.

I'll stop rambling now.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 8:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'll second Space. It just seems to mean more when someone takes the time to sit down, find a pen and a piece of paper (if you're really lucky, stationary) and spend a few moments thinking only of communicating with you. Maybe my only-child status is showing here, but emails can be copied and forwarded and blind carbon copied and sent en mass; having a piece of paper in your hand with your name on it in someone else's handwriting is a moment of individuality in a mass output world. Taking the time to communicate by any means is appreciated, but taking the time to do it well is a greater sign of respect and love for one particular person than he or she may have experienced all day.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 6:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, if you guys think your educational systems are bad, what am I supposed to say? Greek education is actually very math-oriented, as kids get to study Advanced and Abstract Mathematic Logic (hope it translates right!) in high school. Same thing with Physics and Chemistry (we were working on Quantum Mechanics, molecular orbitals and Schwandinger's equation in high school's second grade).

But when it came to actual reading and writing... nothing.

Not that there wasn't an effort. Litterature and Writing held an important part of our curriculum. But the way they were taught was a despair. In Litterature we simply read some pre-chosen texts and poems aloud... We spent more time memorizing this and that period in this and that writer's life than actually studying the writer's/poet's work. If, and I repeat, if we were lucky and got a teacher that really loved their job, then maybe we would get to do some actual commenting on the texts. And even then, it was purely technical. We were being taught what kind of answers we were supposed to give and that's it. I remember once raising my hand and saying I had a different opinion about a character's motives in the text we had been reading... Our professor was looking at me like I was crazy, claiming that what she said was the right thing and the matter was considered closed.

Writing was even worse. The subjects we were given to analyze were dreadful. To give you a hint, in the country-wide examinations that mark which university and faculty we may enter, we were asked to comment on "The existence of Intellectual People today". My first reaction to that was What the...?

I almost failed that one, naturally. It took my acing at every single other subject to barely make it into Medicine, my lifelong dream (even though I do nag about it from time to time Razz ). But last year, I got to work with another student on a collaboration project for one of our courses. That guy had practically received a 100% in Writing, which I always admired him for. Until I got to read his part of the project that is. I swear half of his sentences were 9 lines long...

I ended up practically re-writing the whole thing on my own. Now, I don't claim that I deserved a higher grade in Writing myself, I know that it was one of my 'weak' subjects because I obsolutely loathed the idea of being handed some ridiculous subject and then write down what I was supposed to write, like a good little student. But how is it that someone who didn't even know what commas are got to ace in it and I was considered a failure?

So, in the end, the ptoblem is teachers don't know what it is they want their students to learn. Or at least, that's how I feel about it...

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 8:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It all boils down to this:

I need to rule the world and all this nonsense would stop...

Very Happy

But seriously, back to what Viv and Species Weavil were saying, I think there is something about getting a letter that makes them priceless. Our addiction to recieving instant information makes a hand written letter so much more personal. I know when I was in Basic Training for the Army, a letter from home was worth its weight in gold. I remember begging for them from friends. My dad understood it (having been in the military) so he wrote me every week. I know a hand written Thank You Note has more effect. I find it oddly amusing that with all our communication advancement that hand written correspondence has actually increased in value.


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 9:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I take any excuse I can to write a letter, but then I'm one of those that gets flushed going into a stationary store ... all that nice clean paper ... pretty little notebooks ... and fountain pens! oooooooooh ....
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 1:24 pm    Post subject: Re: What do you think? Reply with quote

DeLynn wrote:
...reasons for the lack of literacy, poor grammar, spelling, etc. today in several news articles.
..."


If you don't mind a newbie stepping in briefly...(Yes, my 'newness' is still blinding. Smile )

Like so many things, it's also a matter of expectation - or the lack of it. As a society, we don't seem to expect things like good behavior much less standard writing ability from graduate students. We *hope*, but we don't really *expect*. And except in certain quarters, we certainly don't demand it. We tolerate. I ask myself: Is it any wonder?
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