| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Message |
ghettoelleth
Joined: 06 Nov 2004
Posts: 1804
|
 Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 8:07 am Post subject: I think I'm either ready, or I'm going to throw up. |
 |
|
Alrighty, I need a hand. No beta involved. Someone who knows Sil. It's only the first eight pages. I need it checked for flow, continuity (I think that's the same thing but...) and, I can't believe I'm saying this, plausability within the constraints of canon. A heavy discussion on hroa and fea may be involved. I can't see anything but individual words at this point. I need a fresh pair of eyes. The rest of the story will be fine with just straight beta but this part needs a special touch. My guts are in this and I can't seem to get past it til I put it to rest. Poor Cirdan's standing on a balcony with no shirt on and I have to get these other 4 off the beach before I can move him.
That's it. Seriously, I think I'm gonna be ill now.
Jes
_________________
"The trouble with quotes on the internet is that you can not confirm their validity." Abraham Lincoln |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
ellisk
Joined: 23 Jan 2004
Posts: 579
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
|
| Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 1:58 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| I know the Silmarillion well and I'm interested in the hroa/fea thing so I'd be happy to read it to give you thoughts on plausibility and flow if you would like. You can PM me or email me (email is in my profile). |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Viv
Challenge Admin
Joined: 24 Apr 2003
Posts: 71
Location: Texas
|
| Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 4:17 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| I dig hroa/fea discussion and have been known to read. A lot. Feel free to PM me if you need another set of eyes. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Yavanie
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Posts: 630
Location: Texas
|
| Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 5:43 pm Post subject: |
|
|
OOHH so unfair! leaving Cirdan on YOUR balcony shirtless!!!! Can't wait 'til we see some of this posted!!!!
_________________
Yavanie
...I understand the sadness of the Elves, and I have seen Mordor.
To be older and wiser you must first be younger and stupider. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
Live Journal Feed
