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fairyfaye

Joined: 12 Jul 2004 Posts: 10 Location: Arizona
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2005 12:25 am Post subject: Beta needed for PWP smut |
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Here's the premise: On the night of her marriage, Arwen, with the help of Gandalf, sets up a little companionship for some of the heroes of the War of the Ring. I'm planning on a chapter each for Eomer, Legolas, Gimli (yes, dwarf sex!), and perhaps Elladan and Elrohir, with the potential for a hobbit sequel. The story is a WIP, and I intend to post 1-2 chapters at a time, with a total of maybe 5 chapters. This will be my first attempt to publish fanfiction.
Its main purpose is smut, but my goal is to have a bit of good characterization for our canon characters and my OCs.
I'm really looking for someone who can evaluate the worthiness of the smut itself (I'm shooting for a somewhat literary style, attempting to stay away from cliches and words like "turgid," "slit," "cum," etc.), identify things that don't work, and tell me if I've got any major canon conflicts. Proofreading skills are not really required.
Has it been done before? I don't really care. If you have questions, feel free to post them here. Send me a PM if you're interested. |
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fairyfaye

Joined: 12 Jul 2004 Posts: 10 Location: Arizona
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 7:41 pm Post subject: |
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Well, I'm going to table it for now. I realized I made an error with dates when I was double-checking my facts, and I need to either take out a chapter or change the whole premise. I've got some thinking to do, I guess....
But thanks to those who responded. |
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Eruanna

Joined: 11 Jan 2005 Posts: 426 Location: Dor-Cuarthol, betwixt the Bow and the Helm...
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 8:38 pm Post subject: |
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| fairyfaye wrote: | Well, I'm going to table it for now. I realized I made an error with dates when I was double-checking my facts, and I need to either take out a chapter or change the whole premise. I've got some thinking to do, I guess....
But thanks to those who responded. |
Fairy:
Check you PM.
--Eruanna _________________ "I have returned from the Northern Fences," said the Elf, "and I am sent now to be your guide again." |
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