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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2005 8:18 am    Post subject: I know I'm nit-picking but ... Reply with quote

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Would use of the word 'coalfire', vis a vis Tolkien's ME, be anachronistic?

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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2005 4:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I may be in an advanced english class, but I can't figure out for the life of me what you mean by coalfire. (Considering it wasn't in the dictionary)

If you meant a fire that uses coal instead of wood, maybe. I don't think that in our world, around the era that Middle-Earth is based on of course, they had coal.

I think. Don't quote me on that. I wouldn't put it in a fanfiction just because I really don't see them having coal yet.

OH! I'm an idiot. If they used coal for fires, in Isenguard (I totally spelled that wrong) they wouldn't have had to cut down Fanghorn Forest. Right?

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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2005 4:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm a little embarrassed here because all my family were coal miners (or all the male ones anyway) going back about six generations, and yet I know very little about coal mining technique.

I know it's possible to just find the stuff or dig it up without actually having to mine, in a system known as open cast, because my dad's laboratory deals with one of the last ones of those in the UK. So it's feasible that Hobbits or Men in Gondor perhaps could have dug that up quite easily. They could also have sunk mines as well, I suppose, but as far as I know it's not mentioned anywhere.

Another alternative thing they might use is peat, which is also like rotted, fossilised vegetable matter that you can cut out of the ground in marshy / boggy areas.

I have no idea if any of that is helpful in the slightest.

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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2005 7:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

MITAQOSWOFTROHVVLT wrote:
I can't figure out for the life of me what you mean

You're not alone there ...

MITAQOSWOFTROHVVLT wrote:
...by coalfire. (Considering it wasn't in the dictionary)

Embarassed
MITAQOSWOFTROHVVLT wrote:
If you meant a fire that uses coal instead of wood, maybe.

Yes, that is what I meant.

MITAQOSWOFTROHVVLT wrote:
I wouldn't put it in a fanfiction just because I really don't see them having coal yet.

OH! I'm an idiot. If they used coal for fires, in Isenguard (I totally spelled that wrong) they wouldn't have had to cut down Fanghorn Forest. Right?

Yeah ... you're probably right; should go change it Crying or Very sad

SpaceWeavil wrote:
Another alternative thing they might use is peat, which is also like rotted, fossilised vegetable matter ...

Much more realistic, but not very romantic: "she had hair like peat fire ..." I wouldn't

SpaceWeavil wrote:
I have no idea if any of that is helpful in the slightest.

Yes. Thanks to both of you. This is probably the kind of thing that most people would gloss over in reading, but since I did question it when writing I figured I'd better cover my bases.

*sigh*
-NB off to rewrite

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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2005 7:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like the peat suggestion. But perhaps the dwarfs were mining coal somewhere in Middle Earth?

Apologies if i am being silly *i'll blame the allergy med*


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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2005 7:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

For the hair thing you could use the phrase "Her hair was like burning embers." or however you want to put it.

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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2005 7:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ooh, memory just kicked in.

Dunno if this is of any help at all, but in Book of Lost Tales 1 there is a description of Nienna's halls in Aman, where she sits by a brazier with a single coal. (which gives off the only light) So you could draw reference to that, or at least that hints that coal was known of?

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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2005 10:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

But then coals are also little chunks of burning wood that are larger than embers (sitting by the coals of the fire kind of thing). And that is how we get charcoal, right? It could be that kind of coal that they're talking about. Half-burned wood, not the rocks, I mean.

Just a thought...

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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2005 12:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Charcoal is word that's been burned once. The "little rocks" are processed charcoal.

They might have <b>coke</b> which is a type of coal that's been heated. It's popular with smiths of all kinds, as it burns good & hot.

I would expect that the dwarves use coke for their forges.
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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2005 2:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Um, I'm probably sort of stating the obvious here - but to get charcoal you have to burn coal first, which brings you full circle to the question about coal.

I realise ME is totally fictional, but chemical process would remain the same regardless and coal being a fossil fuel would still form in the same way. Trees may have been used for speed as coal mining is a fairly slow process and would have slowed Saruman down.

In Wales, many years ago, there were areas where coal was visible on the surface. Poor people would collect it in baskets and use it at home.

Hope this has been of some help (probably I've just confused the issue even more - sorry!)

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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2005 8:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't see a problem with using coal (the fossil fuel) either as a description or a heat source. I would think the dwarves would have to use something like that, being holed up in a mountain. Otherwise they would have completely denuded Lorien from Moria. The Elves would have REALLY been pissed at them.

Smithwork takes ALOT of fuel so something besides trees had to be used in Doriath. Gondolin was in the mountains far from large forests and it would take a great number of trees just for cooking fires. So for our purposes, IMHO something like coal had to be used in ME.

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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2005 9:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I am supposing that wood burns "cleaner" without the mess of coal the fossil fuel. I go with Inglor's suggestion that for smithwork, partciularly with the dwarves underground, that coal would be a more practical source. However, for daily life, cooking, in a home or house, my bet would be on wood. That's my two cents. I think you could incorporate general reference to either without a problem. I would imagine Tolkien would have been familiar with both.
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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2005 9:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you all for your answers; I feel like my sometimes runaway imagination has a good footing now.

Lastly, and Belatedly, I've looked up "Coal" in Websters (www.m-w.com) and here's their first definition:

Quote:
1 : a piece of glowing carbon or charred wood : EMBER

Doh!

Works for me. Very Happy

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PostPosted: Sat May 21, 2005 9:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it also depends if you're thinking coal or charcoal ... which can be 'made' using a mound that slowly chars the wood. It's a method that has been used for centuries (I first discovered it in Edward Rutherfurd's The Forest) but there are plenty of websites that describe it ... it has been used even in medieval times so it is possible that the people of ME could have used a similar method -- even Saruman's ppl. Not sure how to actually code the links, but here are a couple that have photos that show you what is done ... basically wood is piled up, then earth/sod/leaves are piled overtop and the wood is set on fire where it burns extremely slowly and reduces the wood to charcoal. Apparently it produces a fairly high quality charcoal...

http://www.bidwellhousemuseum.org/Program_1999/charcoal.htm

http://www.fao.org/documents/show_cdr.asp?url_file=/docrep/X5328e/x5328e07.htm
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PostPosted: Sat May 21, 2005 9:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, and just found this reference for you in the Hobbit, Nancy ...

Quote:
"Of course there is a mark," said Gandalf. "I put it there myself. For very good reasons. You asked me to find the fourteenth man for your expedition, and I chose Mr. Baggins. Just let any one say I chose the wrong man or the wrong house, and you can stop at thirteen and have all the bad luck you like, or go back to digging coal."


AND

Quote:
Then baa-baa-baa! was heard, and in came some snow-white sheep led by a large coal-black ram.


AND

Quote:
There on the grey stone in the grass was an enormous thrush, nearly coal black, its pale yellow breast freckled dark spots.


So I'd say you're pretty safe in saying 'coal' in your story...

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