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TheMissing



Joined: 13 Nov 2003
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 18, 2003 2:42 pm    Post subject: Need Help with a Story Reply with quote
My story is called An Elf`s Dilemma and it`s on here in Lord of the Rings Movieverse. I am open to all comments even people who say it sucks. I edit and I edit. I just know I want Gwen to go with Tegellan even though it will be a little sad. Limion treats her like trash and she needs something better. Wink Kiss I want a romance that works not a romance that hurts. Twisted Evil
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NancyBrooke
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Joined: 11 May 2003
Posts: 160
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
PostPosted: Wed Nov 19, 2003 4:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Skewing the topic slightly, I glanced over your story and my first question was - did you have a beta reader? You need some grammar help as well as story line help, as well as, it seems, a little shot in the arm. Get a good beta - the first line of offense.

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TheMissing



Joined: 13 Nov 2003
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 20, 2003 10:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
oh thank you so much!!! I have given up on this topic mind you and have started another.
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