[eresse]

I've begun to write new story and am becoming rather proud of it, however, I would really like to get some constructive criticism as to how it (and my writing in general) could be improved. I'm a little worried that it moves slowly, and would really like someone to just give me some solid feedback.

Link!

Thanks.

Sincerely,

Eresse.

[ghettoelleth]

Hey Eresse,

Can you give us a few hints on genre etcetera? Why I might not have time for a movie based, Legoccentric surfing fic, I might have some time for something a bit more juicy, hehe.

G

[eresse]

Of course, sorry.

Um yeah. It's about a character who's family flees Tharbad during the Fell Winter in order to avoid the inevitable flooding. She's got relatives in Rohan and her family plans to head there. She winds up getting separated, is found by a ranger, then injured by a wolf attack and brought to Rivendell.

My purpose for writing this is really more about how a stray human would honestly be received in the house of Elrond. She's young, and I wanted to sort of play around with the way she perceives things to be, and the way they actually are. I like to think that my OC is not a representation of myself in the world, but, like anything anyone writes it does contain elements of myself.

I don't know if it has a specific genre... it's not a romance, nor really an action story...

I dunno. I hope that's clear enough.

[ghettoelleth]

well, it sounds interesting, why don't you send it to me and I'll look at it. ghettoelleth@aol.com

[ghettoelleth]

duh
found the link, nevermind. Am having a look