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NeumeIndil



Joined: 06 Jun 2005
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Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA

PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2006 9:11 am    Post subject: Need Intense Beta Reply with quote

I'll try to keep this short. The fic is my take on Eomer/Lothiriel. It's AU/movie verse but staying canon plausible. Most of the changes regard character ages and a few dates. It's running about 4,000 words/ 10 pgs. a chapter, currently 40+ chapters (160,000 words, ye gods!). Like most of my stuff, it's Horse Lord smut (NC-17) and starts around the time Eomer was banished/ imprisoned. I think it's going to finish somewhere in early fourth age, but I haven't gotten that far yet. Chapter 1 is posted at my live journal with warnings etc. if anyone is interested in reading a bit. http://neumeindil.livejournal.com/5400.html#cutid1

I'm looking for... well, some sanity first and foremost. Smile Grammar is one of my stronger points, but I tend to be long winded on details. I have the plot laid out already but am having trouble getting it onto the page b/c I'm worried about editing as I go. I just want to get the darn thing off my desk but I don't think it's quite ready to post yet. Also as it's bridging the gap between Rohan and Gondor, someone with solid knowledge of Gondor (specifically Belfalas and Minas Tirith) in T.A. 2970 to F.A. 1 would be great. The more I reread, the more I think this might have to become a multi-part fic, series or something similar, so I'm looking for "in it for the long haul" help, which I realize might be tough to find. But, there's no harm in asking, right? If you're interested or know someone who is, please PM me, email (in my profile) or reply to the LJ post.

Thanks for reading this far (Told'ja I was long winded Wink),
Neume

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Rhapsody



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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2006 11:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I replied at you LJ, it sounds like an intriguing story to me. Very Happy
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NeumeIndil



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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2006 6:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sigh. Whew. Thanks Rhaps.
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