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NancyBrooke Challenge Admin
Joined: 11 May 2003 Posts: 160 Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 8:33 am Post subject: Shamelessly Seeking Feedback |
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I wanted to publically thank all of you who reviewed my (as I see it) magnum opus "Who The Sword Devours" while it was being posted, particularly Aganuzir who helped me hew to canon where the Nazgul were concerned.
For one reason and another, most of them still inexplicable, this story was exceedingly difficult and time consuming for me to complete and, now that it is finally complete, I would love some feedback on the ending and the piece as a whole. I felt on a very thin limb at times, particularly with characterizations, the ending(s), and the number of details of Osgiliath I thought needed to be crammed in and continue to wonder if it worked.
If you read, and want to let me your final thoughts, I'd appreciate hearing about it here, in a story review, by pm or e-mail. Okay, sounding a little pathetic now so I'd better conclude:
Thanks, friends,
NB _________________ NB Duchess of WHY TF Cant'chu Punctuate, First Duchess of F*&(ing &*ll yur comma placement sux!
Nazgul #3 in charge of ducking & sniggering
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Sulriel

Joined: 06 Jan 2004 Posts: 286 Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 2:29 pm Post subject: loved it |
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well. I had it on my MEFA nomination list, but it's NC-17.
Overall, I really enjoyed it and gave it a 5 star rating, but RL has had me chasing my tail so hard lately that I ran smack dab into myself and knocked myself out last friday. at least I got a little nap out of the deal!
I apologize for not leaving a more detailed or thoughtful review. I know how much those can mean and I should have taken the time. _________________ "May it be a light to you in dark places." |
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Anna

Joined: 29 Jan 2004 Posts: 548 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 1:57 pm Post subject: |
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I´m reading it right now and so far I like it very much! I downloaded it as soon as you posted it and I´ve almost finished it. I do mean to review it as soon as I´ve read it.
Don´t worry, Nancy, you´re always brilliant!  _________________ '...the vision is always solid and reliable. The vision is always a fact. It is the reality that is often a fraud.' G.K. Chesterton
Reality is for people who can´t handle Middle-earth! |
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