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maravelynne
Joined: 03 Jun 2004 Posts: 5
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2004 11:48 am Post subject: I need a beta for a chick flick w/ Merry |
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This is my new story about Merry trying to reflect on his past by remembering how to sword fight. It was meant to be poetic but I think it might be confusing and every story I write I get told about my horrible punctuation. I'm terrible with grammar and if somebody could please please please beta it for me I would appreciate it greatly!!! Thanx
you can email me at overmascared24@yahoo.com
i don't care if you bash it to pieces in criticism! it's better a beta than a regular reader... I just want it fixed! |
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queenoftheshire

Joined: 03 Dec 2003 Posts: 607 Location: Catching Birds with a Pool Skimmer
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2004 6:53 pm Post subject: |
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Ooh! Me!
I'm up for a nice hobbit beta-ing job! Any special requirements you'd like or need? _________________ ||Lex||Yoda||Sooker||
I'm coming for you..
I'm the shadow in the corner of the room.
I'm the reason you feel sick in the morning.
I'm the panic attack, at the end of the day.
I loved you.
And now you're gone. |
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