[SpaceWeavil]

Hello all,
I’m looking for someone to beta a short fic for me. Basically I uploaded this story (perhaps prematurely) and although it’s had no reviews, it has had a bad rating. So I’m looking for someone who could cast an eye over this and possibly tell me what is wrong with it? I have every intention of rewriting it and reposting, however I have no idea what the problem is at the moment, as I’m too close to it. Also if they could give my spelling and grammar a quick look, that’d be great, but generally I am not too horrendous on that front.

It’s a Second Age fic, revolving around the final meeting between Elrond and Elros.

So if anyone wouldn’t mind helping a slightly neurotic, pestering Space Weavil, please let me know

[Andreth]

I saw this story last night but didn't have time to read it. I guess you must have already removed it because I just went back to find it and it was gone. Elrond and Elros are some of my favorites and I'm writing about both of them now myself, so I've been going back over the book information about them. I'll give it a once over for content if you want to send it to me. tawmt@cimtel.net