Reviews by inglor

The Mark of a… Warrior? · Tue Oct 12, 2004 8:20 am

HA! Nailed it.

Oak and Willow · Mon Oct 11, 2004 2:35 pm

Maybe its because I'm male but Galadriel is my favorite of the pair. Just enough arrogance to be interesting, just enough humility to be believable.

Your patience for getting something right is downright Elvish. The lengths you go to make this a good story. Not just the mechanics but what actually happens. They don't rush into things, just like what rational Elves (not related to or influenced by Feanor) would do. Besides your skill at telling the tale, the actual events and progression of events is as believable as if the Prof himself had written it. I think somewhere in Valinor, the Professor is smiling.

Inglor

Cursed Love · Mon Oct 04, 2004 10:55 am

That last line was a crusher.
Calling out to his mother like a mortally wounded soldier. That one line spoke volumes, the whole story captured in one sentence.

I hope you are very proud of yourself, I would be.

Inglor

Strange Revels · Tue Sep 28, 2004 1:55 pm

Oh that was warped... and very, very good.

Inglor

Snorg: Letters from Mordor · Tue Sep 28, 2004 9:46 am

I can't tell you how many times I have read this, still makes me laugh.

"With grunts and assorted kisses" has to be one of the funniest lines I have ever read

Inglor

Comfort · Tue Sep 28, 2004 9:13 am

Inglor

Do You Know Why I Sent For You? · Tue Sep 28, 2004 8:51 am

Just the right amount of description, anymore would be cumbersome and spoil the pace.
I really liked how well you captured the playfulness of the couple, made it more real.

*writes Ellbee's name down in notebook of How to Write Stuff*

Inglor
*wanders off to find wifey and wine*

Oak and Willow · Fri Sep 24, 2004 9:53 am

Since I have read this numerous times in numerous places all I can say is
Bounce smiley face

I've said this before about your work but I will say it again, This is Worth Paying for.

Inglor

Playing Field · Fri Sep 10, 2004 8:45 am

I'm only up to ch 2 and this really is good. Eomer as the chaste paladin. This is how I think Galahad would have reacted to ... adult banter. He is innocent but not too much, and the way you back this with a description of his family life makes it very believable.

I'm with Sind, count me as a fan, your work is a pleasure to read. A rare find.

Inglor

Crossroads of Time · Wed Sep 01, 2004 9:54 am

Rous said
> Intriguing story. I, too, am interested in more. The writing is above average and the imagery is good. The premise is interesting. I hope you update soon. And remember the number one rule: NO SHORT CHAPTERS. There, now that that is out, hurry up and update.
> Thank you.

Ditto
You wrote enough to tease...

One thing though: This is a nit pick but it lends to a credible story, I don't think even elves would hunt in shiny armour, too much noise and too much sparkly stuff to scare off prey.

Inglor

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