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What Fili and Kili found (G)
by ZeeDrippyVessel.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [BBFilli and BBKili. That's warning enough.]
Mon Apr 22, 2013 2:01 pm

Brilliant. I admit the ending surprised me. I'm cat orientated so was thinking feline...and the boys were perfect as wwas poor Thorin 'That Someone else
 
Author's replied on Mon Apr 22, 2013 11:48 pm
Oh thank you for reading! The Dwarf Muse was quite insistent that it be a baby warg! LOL! So that's what it was. Now he's insisting I write Teenaged Fili and Kili.. . apparently Dwarves are teens for like 30 or 40 years.. .. oh my.
 
A Simple Cold (G)
by karushna5.

Chapters [2]
Reviews [3]
Wed Jan 09, 2013 5:29 pm

Wonderfully sweet & touching. I liked both versions! I loved also the family togetherness of Elrond, Elrohir, Elladan + Aragorn.
 
 
Reason in Madness (R)
by NiennaNir.

Chapters [14]
Reviews [33]
Warnings [Dark Humor]
Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:07 am

It is nice to see this updated. I really enjoyed reading the Aragorn bit and the flashback was a nice bit of backhistory.
 
 
Reason in Madness (R)
by NiennaNir.

Chapters [14]
Reviews [33]
Warnings [Dark Humor]
Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:01 am

Good chapter! You've certainly managed to make me dislike Rumil even more so give yourself a pat on the back!

The potion won't work as Arwen loves Aragorn too much for something like that to interfere so I await to read what happens with interest!

Just one criticism: try not to use 'smirked' all the time, it gets repetitive. Otherwise carry on!
 
 
Reason in Madness (R)
by NiennaNir.

Chapters [14]
Reviews [33]
Warnings [Dark Humor]
Fri Aug 10, 2007 6:37 am

Lovely chapter! RL interfered with reading this before now but I must say I enjoyed it very much! Particular favourites were: Haldir's and Arwen's interactions and the mention of Haldir's loyalty to Aragorn (beautiful in a grievous way) and the whole scene with Laurelin and her mother.

I definitely am disliking Rumil and co. more and more and hope they are found out soon. Haldir I dare say will be mightliy upset when he discovers their contemptous schemes!

Keep up the good work and please update soon!
 
 
Reason in Madness (R)
by NiennaNir.

Chapters [14]
Reviews [33]
Warnings [Dark Humor]
Tue May 01, 2007 11:31 am

Ooo! Meant toa dd that the sadnees/grief that runs through this chapter is bitter yet sweet!
 
 
Reason in Madness (R)
by NiennaNir.

Chapters [14]
Reviews [33]
Warnings [Dark Humor]
Tue May 01, 2007 11:29 am

I loved how noble Haldir was in this chapter - it definitely fitted my version of the book!Haldir.

I must also congratulate you on your reference to the old Tales form The Silmarillion; it added that pinch of spice and flavour to the story which makes it stand out from others. I wish him and Aduial luck!

Silverian (sorry, can't spell) also adds drama now that she knows -will she or won't she tell Arwen of Aragorn's presence?

Aragorn recalling the past and being uncertain is interesting so do continue! Please don't leave it so long NiennaNir! <Jadwiga#
 
 
Reason in Madness (R)
by NiennaNir.

Chapters [14]
Reviews [33]
Warnings [Dark Humor]
Mon Dec 04, 2006 12:22 pm

I'm glad that you updated! Hmmm ... it didn't live up to previous chapters I feel. It was still good and it is great to have Aragorn regaining his memory and healing, and Arwen beginning to suspect. But ... I would have perferred to have *more* Aragorn Haldir interaction and more Arwen, and less on the OCs (not that most aren't compelling). Looking forward to more! Nice job so far!
 
 
Home Again (PG)
by Sulriel.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [6]
Tue Nov 07, 2006 7:26 am

A cat story! Thank you! I always thought there should have been more about this Queen's cats. *Cough* Yes ... I'm a cat lover - excellently done with vivd portrayal.
 
 
The Problem of Curufinwë (G)
by Noldo.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Fri Nov 03, 2006 5:02 pm

Very insightful essay into Feanor! A keeper most certainly. Thank you for shedding light on a much malinged character I think.