Reviews by marcia

The Feud of Shadow and Light · Wed May 04, 2005 8:01 pm

What confusion at the wedding?!

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Trust To Hope, Book Two · Fri Apr 15, 2005 6:10 pm

I always promise myself that I won't read anymore WIP's Work In Progress smiley face

and then have no self control and do it anyway! For me, it would have been better to have had the last two chapters posted as one long chapter. I don't enjoy the angst or the cliffhangers. But, I seem to be in a very small minority because I've read through the reviews and your readers seem to thrive on such.

As for the chapters and the writing itself, bravo! The character development is wonderful, Lothiriel is definitely a queen. Does jrrt tell us how many children E/L have or do we know just of the one son? Will have to go look that up.

Thank you for the entire E/L saga, it's been a delight to read. Smart, controlled, generous and emotional and not salacious. kudos!

As for Willa, I think she's an even better villian than the ones in the previous story. And, I'm sure she'll be getting her 'just desserts'. Certainly she's conjured the dragon and will wind up
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New Magic - A Tale of a Blue Wizard · Tue Apr 12, 2005 8:42 pm

HOT!

Trust To Hope, Book Two · Mon Apr 04, 2005 3:37 pm

you updated!! hooray! keep writing. and, try to remember that even though it's fun to play out the misunderstandings and angst, they do in reality irreparably damage a marriage and should be resolved much more quickly than they are being in this story if the wonderful relationship you have created between Eomer and Anhuil is to survive. I know there is a tendency in fiction to string these situations out and then resolve them with the idea that then all will be well. I am an old woman now and as I look back on my life I see that it doesn't work that way. Hurt, anxiety, fear all damage a loving relationship and the best one can hope for is strong scar tissue to form, itself a poor substitute for the beauty of the original flesh. So, I'm advising that you don't keep Anhuil in the dark about Willa for much longer. Perhaps while Eomer is away his queen can discover the truth.

New Magic - A Tale of a Blue Wizard · Mon Mar 14, 2005 2:15 am

wonderful new chapter! Very Happy smiley face

Trust To Hope, Book Two · Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:08 am

darling! why haven't you updated????? at least add to the reviews and let us know what's happened to you.

lovely stories. bravo and thank you!

Crossroads of Time · Sun Jan 16, 2005 4:07 am

Ellie, where have you gone! Please post more of your fascinating story....such an interesting premise and so well written. Do you need a beta? Is that slowing you down?

Marcia

New Magic - A Tale of a Blue Wizard · Wed Jan 12, 2005 2:25 am

Ingole! read and reread....am dying DYING to find out what Tari has in store for Celeborn Wink smiley face

Dare we hope for more soon??

The Phoenix and the Griffin · Mon Jan 10, 2005 9:56 pm

Just read ch 59 - the reunion went well, didn't it? I love that you've succeeded in making the Phaila/Amaras relationship stand out so clearly in juxtaposition to Phaila/Isong and Phaila/Haldir without actually diminishing those ellyn or those relationships. I think that's quite and achievement! I love both Isong and Haldir and couldn't imagine how you were going to make me believe that she belonged with Amaras, especially instead of with Isong, but you have!!

KUDOS!

New Magic - A Tale of a Blue Wizard · Sat Jan 08, 2005 1:15 pm

just woke up to an email from Havetoist that you'd posted this story! came right over to print and read!! can't wait! Laughing smiley face

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