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The Phoenix and the Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.
Chapters [104]
Reviews [ 83] Warnings [Sex, language, warlike violence]
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Sat Jan 08, 2005 2:36 am
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I know how much effort you've put into perfecting ch 56-58, how much time, and IT WAS WORTH IT!! They are lovely, your choices have been inspired throughout and all your perspiring over each sentence has paid off handsomely indeed.
And, your title for chapter 57 is nothing less than inspired in its poignancy!!
"Farewell, thou art too dear for my possessing" |
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The Phoenix and the Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.
Chapters [104]
Reviews [ 83] Warnings [Sex, language, warlike violence]
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Tue Dec 07, 2004 3:05 am
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| This story just keeps getting better and better! Am loving every minute of it. This story is richly developed, the world is interesting and beautifully described and the characters! The characters, even the minor ones, are well drawn, are real, mostly likeable, complicated. The tug of good and evil, swinging between the poles as we all do, but these elves do it on a grand scale! I know there's more to come and aren't we all blessed! Thank you! |
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My Girl (G)
by Havetoist.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 11] Warnings [None]
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Tue Dec 07, 2004 2:58 am
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I felt from the beginning that I was reading a poem, very lyrical, very vivid images. That's one of the strengths of your writing, the images. And, the polished metaphors, wonderful dialogue, anyone who hasn't read your other stories as well as this poem should go check them out, they're a joy. You've got real ability to create believable worlds for your readers to move into! Thanks, indeed, for sharing this work and all your work with us.
Marcia |
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Alliance (R)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [17]
Reviews [ 70] Warnings [strong violence, battle scenes]
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Tue Nov 23, 2004 9:56 pm
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so glad you keep posting new chapters! thank you!  |
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Found (PG-13)
by Lailonniel.
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Sun Oct 10, 2004 3:10 am
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| This story is sweet, lovely. Please write/post more soon! And, thank you! |
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The Phoenix and the Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.
Chapters [104]
Reviews [ 83] Warnings [Sex, language, warlike violence]
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Fri Oct 01, 2004 8:34 pm
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Havetoist, you wrote: concerning what to do with Isong....what to do, what to do....
Please, I KNOW what to do with Isong....so, just send him over to my house!
Seriously, this story has gotten so good, I, too, loved it from the start, just don't have any words. Write more, keep posting!
I've been meaning to make you a list of its 'little gems' as Ingole said....your phrasing and word choices frequently surprise and delight. |
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Rose in the King's Garden (NC-17)
by Jackies3617.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 11]
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Tue Sep 21, 2004 7:01 pm
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| this was even yummier than the first story......thank you..... |
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In the King's Garden (NC-17)
by Jackies3617.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 13] Warnings [Smut]
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Tue Sep 21, 2004 6:59 pm
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| yummie!! |
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Amarië & Haldir: Paths of Destiny (R)
by Julie.
Chapters [18]
Reviews [ 23]
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Wed Sep 15, 2004 2:05 am
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Hi Julie,
JUst reread this for the 3rd or 4th time. Thank you so much, it is just a joy, a real pleasure. I actually meant to reread Elanor in preparation for the next chapter, you know, the one you said you'll be posting later this week, but got drawn back into this and couldn't stop reading.
hugs,
marcia |
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The Phoenix and the Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.
Chapters [104]
Reviews [ 83] Warnings [Sex, language, warlike violence]
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Sun Aug 01, 2004 1:32 pm
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Wonderful story! I could live in the world you've created. Characters are sooooo real. Descriptions of scenes are vibrant and clear, easy to visualize. Even battle scenes (which are usually gibberish to me.)
More, more, more, more, more,more,more,more, more,....................
I've read reams of fanfic, the vast majority of which is angst driven MarySueish drivel (spelling getting away from me here!) with boring obligatory sex at the end (but with lots of teasers along the way.) Your story, plot and characterizations are nothing like that! What the people do and say comes from a deep reality within their souls. You go girl!
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